2017年11月1日水曜日

Writing-Sr.2-Nov.1st

Describe a trend such as in cars, food, clothes, music, movies, sports, games, social network, mobile device, apps, SNS, or tools that interests you and explain why it’s (getting or going to be) popular.
    fad: things people are interested in for a short period of time

=> Write your paragraph to explain and support your topic sentence. 
Start with a topic sentence including your topic/subject and controlling idea.(<= Writing Skill) 
Use some of the answers from 1~4/p.19-20. Also, refer to the Grammar/p.18, Sample Text/p.18
Try These!: Present Simple and Present Continuous, Present Perfect (Continuous) 

trend a general direction in which a situation is changing or developing. : economical/social ~s, growing ~ towards …, current ~ in …, upward/downward ~, set a new ~
   popular: liked or enjoyed by a large number of people: ~ singer/music/design, getting ~
   fad: things people are interested in for a short period of time

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  1. Line is a trend.
    It have two reasons.
    First, we can chat at same time with group of people.
    Old talk service like SMS can talk only two.
    Second, SMS can't chat between the person that use other phone company.
    But Line can chat whoever register it.
    There are the reason why Line becames a trend.

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    1. TS: trend in what?
      Clearly discribed but too many grammar errors.

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    3. Line is setting the trend.
      There are two reasons.
      First,we can chat with group of people at same time.
      This system is revolutional.
      It is becouse usual talk service such as SMS can talk only two people.
      Second,SMS can't chat between company to other company.
      Line changed this situation.
      By thease useful functions, Line is becoming popular.

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    4. LINE is becoming a trend these days.
      There are two reasons for this.
      First, we can chat in group which has many people at the same time.
      We can't talk with many people by SMS such as e-mails.
      Second, we can't talk with a person whose phone company isn't the same as mine through SMS.(I think we can....)
      But we can talk anyone by LINE.
      These are the reasons why LINE is becoming popular.

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    5. Line is getting very popular these days.
      There are two reasons.
      First, we can chat with many people at the same time while conventional messaging service like SMS is just one on one.
      Second, whereas SMS is limited only among the users of the same phone carrier, Line can be used with any registered members.
      Line is a new trend in mobile communication.

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    6. Line is on the trend.
      There are two reasons.
      First, we can chat at the same time with group of people.
      We were able to talk with only two people with former talk service like SMS.
      Second, we can’t chat with the people that use other phone company by using SMS.
      But we can chat with anyone that uses Line.
      These are the reasons why Line is becoming popular.

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    7. Line is becoming popular.
      There are two reasons.
      First,we can chat more than two people at same time.
      Old talk service like SMS can talk only two.
      Second ,SMS can not chat by diffirent company's phones but Line can do .
      For these reasons,Line becomes a trend.

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    8. Line become popular.
      I have two reasons.
      First, we can chat at the same time with people who is in same group.
      The old talking service like SNS can't talk to many people.
      Second, SNS can't chat between the parson who use other phone company.
      But Line can chat with people who are registered in it.
      There are two reasons why Line becames a trend.

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    9. Line, a one of the social networking sevice, is becoming popular among the young people.There are two reasons why Line is a trend.
      First,we can chat with another person or groups at the same time by using Line.
      There are nothing SNS which can chat with goups but Line.
      Second,we can't chat in SMS with the person who use other phone company.
      But we can chat with person whoever we want.
      That why I think Line is a trend among the young people.

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    10. I think Line is used by more people these days.
      We can chat at the same time with many our freinds.
      Other SMS can't talk with more than two people.
      Also,Everone can use it together.
      General SMS can't chat between people who use other phone companies.
      If we use Line,we can chat whoever use other phone companies.
      Line is getting popular these days.

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    11. Line is setting a trend.
      It has two reasons.
      First, we can chat at the same time with people of the group.
      An old talk service like SNS can talk with only two.
      Second, SNS can't chat between the person that use other phone company.
      But Line can chat with whoever register it.
      There are the reasons why Line became a trend.

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    12. LINE becomes a trend tool.
      First, we can chat with many people in the group at the same time.
      SMS, that old talk service, could talk between only two people.
      Second, SMS can't chat with a person who use other company's phone.
      But by using LINE, we can chat everyone who register it.
      For these reasons, LINE becomes a trend.

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    13. Line is becoming popular now.
      It's one of the important communication tools.
      We can chat at the same time with a lot of people.
      We could talk with only one person in the past communication tools such as SMS.
      Also, Line can talk with anyone who download it.
      We couldn't talk with a person who use other phone company when the SMS became popular.

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  2. I think the sport's trend is soccer.
    It doesn't need a lot of money to play.We can play it when you have a soccer ball.If you want to play baseball,you need a bat,a globe and a ball.
    Also,It is safer than other sports.Parents usually want their childen to play safer
    sports.A lot of children are playing these days.It is allowed that we play it in a park.We can't play many sports in a park bacause they are dangerous.
    Soccer is getting popular these days.

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    1. TS: ... soccer is played by more people these days.
      Well explained.
      The subject is the topic of the sentence.
      Be consistent in you or we.

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  3. Instaglam is a popular tool all over the world. If they can't understand other languages, it's not a problem. Because its main is a photo. They publish only photos with some comments. People can find and see good photos and informations from the photos. All people likes things that can understand easily. That's why, Instaglam became popular.

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    1. TS: ... tool to do/for something all over the world.
      Clearly explained but there are quite a few grammar erros.
      Who are "they"?

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  4. I will tell you a instant noodle's trend.
    There are reasons that instant noodles became popular.
    First,Eatting them is easier than cooking.
    They need only hot water .Put water into them, several minutes later, they .
    Also,there are many kinds of tastes ,such as tonkotu ,curry, seafood and so on.They are not bored to people who eat and they've been long hit .
    For these reasons,instant noodles became popular.

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    1. TS: There is a new trend in ...
      Well explained. But trend is something happenning now.

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  5. The Twitter interests me.
    There are tow reasons.
    First, we can get the information very fast.
    For example, when the earthquake is occured, people who use the Twitter said about the earthquake on it.
    Second, we can make friends who have same hobby.
    We share some informations about the hobby with friends and we can also talk with friends who have never met.
    Becouse of two reasons, my trend is the Twitter.

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    1. TS:???
      Well explained. But what is trend???

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  6. Why The Rock is one of popular music categories in the world.
    One reason is people want to get excited by high tempo musuc.
    They enjoy being unusual world.
    Also,they can share feelings in the concert.
    Audience feel happy eachother becouse people who come to the concert likes same music.
    Becouse of thease reasons,Rock music is popular.



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  7. Voice actor is a trend.
    They are popular because their performings are so cool and wonderful.
    The reason why characters in animetions are great is that actors' actings have reality.
    Their forces of acting is awesome and they perform by only their voices.
    They also make fans happy through the songs, dances and how grow they are.
    For example, in concert, they sing and dance in front of many people.
    Their real works are performing but they sing and dance very well.
    We are always moved how cool their performances are.
    The distance between fans and actirs are not far, too.
    They sometimes have talking events, too.
    Fans can send them letters, presents, flowers to their favoite actor after the event and also enjoy actor's thinking through the event by Twitter, blog and so on.

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    1. TS: Is this a trend?
      Very well explained with examples.

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  8. Youtube is very popular now.
    First, there are any kinds of videos such as movie, drama and anime.
    We can watch them for free.
    It is convenient to enjoy watching without money.
    Second, we can connect with others.
    We can share our opinions with anyone on youtube.
    For these reasons, youtube is popular all over the world.

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    1. TS: Is it a trend or just being popular???
      Very well and clearly explained.

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  9. Rock climbing that is one of the sports becomes popular because it spread among people by via media.
    First, it selected the event of Tokyo Olympic in 2020.
    It was announced on TV and newspaper, and taken notice.
    Second, an athlete of rock climbing started appeare on the TV show that is popular among all generation.
    I saw the athlete on my favorite TV show for the guest.
    I was interested about rock climbing as the sports.
    I think rock climbing becomes popular by via media these days.

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    1. TS: Rock climbing is getting popular/becoming a new trend in sports because of media.
      Very well explained and written.

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  10. The computer card game which name is "shadow verse" is becoming popular among young people because of its quality.It is produced by "Cygames."
    This game is a kind of battle by using card deck composed by 40 cards.And the player attack the oponet by using each card.The numbers of down loads of this game is more than 20 millions.The first point why this game became popular is the game style.We use our brain a lot during the battle.So most people don't get bored.The sesond point is the quality of the painting of the each card.The painting of the cards makes people surprising and they try to gather a lot of cards.For these reasons this game became popular.

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    1. TS: Shadow Verse, a ..., is becoming ...
      Very well explained.

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  11. I think Instagram is the trend.
    We can easily to post the beautiful picture such as a famous person was taken.
    If the picture is good, the picture recognized by a lot of people.
    Also, we know the person who lives far away what she is doing.
    We can make an album easily so we are able to communicate without use any words.
    If we use the Instagram, we know what she is doing each other.

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    1. TS: Instagram is setting a new trend in ...
      Well explained but quite a few grammar errors.

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  12. Disney is very popular for many people.
    One reason why it is popular is we can enjoy everything in Disney, such as characters, attractions and food.
    There are many things which made us excited in Disney, so we don't get tired of it.
    Also, Disney seems to be a dream world.
    When people go there, they can forget bad or dislike things.
    People of all ages visit there to get a lot of fun.

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    1. TS: Is this a new trend???
      Very well explained and written.

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