2017年11月29日水曜日

Writing-Sr.2-Nov.29th

Write a paragraph to explain a new business you create.
Example: If you’re designing a new restaurant, what colors would you use for the outdoor signs, interior (walls/floor/ceiling/furniture), tableware and employee uniform? Why?
Try These: Compound Sentences (Conjunctions/p.37), Vocabulary (p.41)
Plan to Write
Company Name
Product/Service
Main Color(s)
Reasons for choosing the color(s) 

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  1. My company's name is Kota's burger shop.
    We take hamburger for customers.
    The burger is cheap, not a lot of amount, and taken fast.
    You can also use drive-through service and delivery service.
    I use white, black, and brown.
    White and black were used at inside of the shop, and brown used in advertisement, logo, uniform in my shop, and in outside of the shop.
    White make customers leave the shop faster, black makes contrast with white,
    and brown makes us relaxed.

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    3. We make hamburgers for customers.

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  2. The name of my clothing company is "Siro city."
    This company sells various clothes.
    The main color is white.White matches all colors.So it makes people to buy colorful clothes.
    And also,white is peaceful and clean.It can describes my company that this clothing store takes care environment.

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  3. Imanage EME.
    It means enjoy music everywhere.
    The service consists of owner who manage restaurants and people who good at music instrument.
    My company send musicians to restaurants and play proper music.
    For example, play Framenco in the spanish restaurant.
    I use green and yellow as logo.
    Green means natural and yellow means sun.
    I want musician to play natural and give energy to customers.

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    1. Write another explanation why green and yeloow are used.

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    2. I manage EME.
      It means enjoy music everywhere.
      The service consists of owner who manage restaurants and people who good at music instrument.
      My company send musicians to restaurants and play proper music.
      For example, play Framenco in the spanish restaurant.
      I use green and yellow as logo.
      Green means natural and yellow means sun.
      I want musician to play songs natural and give energy to customers like the sun.
      Also, these colors look fun and attractive.
      I hope that the order increase by this logo.

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  4. My new company name is CITY music. It is a shop that selling CDs and DVDs.
    I chose dark green and navy for its symbol color. Name is "city" and these days population is gettig fewer who lives in country. So I use this two colors to remain silent and dark forest.
    Also I want to create the image of listening to music is elegan. So I need to make shop's atmosphere to classical.
    That is why I chose two dark color.

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    1. The population is getting fewer who lives in country these days, so I use "city" for my shop's name.

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  5. If I was designing a new drugstore,I would use for the outdoor sighs.The name is "NPBN".
    Green makes people think of the enviroment.
    It show that this company provide harmless medicines for not only people but also nature.
    Blue show that my company are serious and dependable.
    It makes People trust on my conpany.
    So,I use green and blue for my company

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    1. 1. what colors?
      2. what is NPBN?

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    3. 1.If I was designing a new drugstore,I would use green and blue for the outdoor sighs.
      2.The name is "NPBM".It means not only people but also nature.

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  6. I would run a sporting shoes store.
    I use a lot of different colors.
    First,colorful colors make customers more exciting .
    They can enjoy choosing shoes and buying them.
    Second,there are many kind of shoes at shop.
    Many different colors explain the thing to customers.
    For these reasons,I would use a variety of different colors



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  7. Company name is Shiraishi.
    It’s a closing store, and main color is bright orange.
    First, this color which is like red not only be able to seen from a distance but also makes the mind of costomers that they want to buy something.
    Costomers can find my shop easily and buy a lot.
    Second, Bright color gives good and big impression.
    It is easy to remember, so people who know my shop for the first time can remenber it soon.
    Finally, this bright color becomes the costomers happily.
    When people see bright color, they become cheerful.
    My costomers must enjoy shopping in my new shop.

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    1. 3. First, it is seen ... , and it also makes my customers buy...

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    2. First, it is seen from a distance, and it also makes my customers buy something.

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  8. My company name is Amazing pizza.
    The company sells many kinds of pizza.
    The main colors are red, white and green.
    Pizza is Itarian food, and the national flug of Italy is red, white and green.
    These colors are bright and cheerful.
    Red makes people hungly, white makes people relax and green makes people think nature or environment.
    Because of reasons I chooose these colors.

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    1. 6. hungly? relax? think of ...

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    3. Red makes people become hungry, white makes people relaxed and green makes people think nature or environment.

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  9. My new business is a pet shop.
    I would use white for interior.
    I want to use white because it is quiet color, so animals can have comfortable time in the shop.
    It is important for pet shop to keep them cheerful.
    Also, white is clean color.
    I want customers to think that my shop is sanitary.
    White is good color for my pet shop.

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    1. Missing "a" before countable nouns.

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    2. Her new business is a pet shop.
      One idea of her shop's name is a "Nao's cheerful pet shop" that I recommended.
      She wants to use white for her shop's interiors.
      She wants to use white because it is a quiet color, so animals can have comfortable time in there.
      It is important to keep them looks cheerful.
      Also, white is a clean color.
      She wants her customers to think her shop is sanitary.
      White is a good color for her pet shop.

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    3. My new business is a pet shop which name is pet festival.
      I would use white for interior.
      White is a quiet color,so animals can have a comfortable time in the shop.
      And also, it is a clean color.
      I want customers to think that my shop is sanitary.
      White is a good color for my pet shop.

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    4. My new company name is HOUSE of ANIMAL and it is a pet shop.
      In my shop, I would use white for interior.
      White is a quiet color, so animals can have comfortable time in the shop.
      So they seems my shop is their house.
      It is important for pet shop to keep there cheerful space.
      Also, white is clean color. 
      I want customers to think that my shop is sanitary.
      White is good color for my pet shop.

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    6. My new company name is HOUSE of ANIMAL and it is a pet shop.
      In my shop, I would use white for interior.
      White is a quiet color, so animals can have comfortable time in the shop.
      So they seems my shop is their house.
      It is important for pet shop to keep there cheerful space.
      Also, white is a clean color. 
      I want customers to think that my shop is sanitary.
      White is a good color for my pet shop.

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    7. My new business is a pet shop.The name is
      I would use white for its interior.The name is"CAC".
      It means comfortable and cleanly.
      It is a soft color.
      Animals can spend a comfortable time there.
      Keeping animals cheerfully is the most important for pet shops.
      Also,it is a cleanly color.
      I want custormers to think that my shop is a cleanly shop.
      They can spend comfortable time.
      White is the best color for my pet shop.

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    8. My new business is a pet shop.
      The store name is Nao's pet shop.
      I would use white for a shop's interior.
      I want to use it because it is a quiet color, so animals can have confortable time in the shop.
      It is inportant for a pet shop keeps cheerful.
      Also, white is a clean color.
      I want costomers to think that my shop is sanitary.
      White is good color for my pet shop.

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    9. My new business is a pet shop.
      The name is Pet Shop Nao
      I would use white for interior.
      I want to use it because it is quiet color ,so animals can spend comfortable time in the shop.
      It is important for a pet shop to keep them cheerful.
      Also, the color makes us feel clean.
      I want customers to think my shop is
      White is good color for my pet shop.

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    10. My new besiness is managing a pet shop.
      The name of the shop is “CPS”. This stands for Clean Pet Shop.
      I use white because it is a quiet and neat color.
      Animals can have comfortable time in the calm atmosphere.
      It is important for pets to be peaceful.
      Also, it is a clean color.
      It makes costomers feel that my shop is sanitary.
      White is a great color for my pet shop.

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    11. I manage new pet shop "Animal land".
      I will use white mainly for interior.
      It is a quiet color, so animals can relax in the shop.
      And this color can keep them cheerful.
      Also, white is a clean color.
      I want customers to think that my shop is sanitary.
      In thease reasons, white is a proper color for my pet shop.


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    12. My new business is a pet shop.
      The name of my shop is ”Nao’s pet shop”
      I want to use white for interior because it is a quite color.
      It makes animals comfortable in the shop.
      It is important for pet to keep them cheerful.
      Also,white is a clear color.
      I want customers to think that my shop is sanitary.
      White is a good color for my pet shop.

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    13. My new business is a pet shop, and the name is animal-lovers.
      I would use white for the interior.
      I want to use white because it is a quiet color, so animals can have a comfortable time in the shop.
      It is important for pet shops to keep animals cheerful.
      Also, white is a clean color.
      I want customers to think my shop is sanitary.
      White is a good color for my pet shop.

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    14. Post=> “White Pet Shop” is the name of my new business.
      It is a pet shop that mainly sells pet dogs and cats.
      I’ll use white for the interior of my pet shop.
      It is a quiet color, so the pet animals can spend comfortable time there. <=Really???
      It is important for a pet shop to keep the animals in good conditions.
      Also, white is a clean color.
      I want my customers to think that my pet shop is clean and sanitary.
      White is an ideal color for my pet shop.

      Cats and Dogs See Some Colors
      Cats and dogs are just like color-blind humans, seeing some colors but not all of them. For the bright daytime light, cells known as cones are needed. Humans have three kinds of cones, enabling them to see blue, red and green.
      Cats and dogs, on the other hand, have just two kinds of cone cells (blue and green sensitive), allowing them to see only partial color.
      Night Vision
      Luckily for dogs and cats, missing out on seeing life in all its full-color glory is not a big deal. Brightness and motion are far more important aspects of what our pets see.

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  10. I’d use orange and green for my organic steak restaurant.
    Customers can have healthy steak, because the meat’s feed is organic plants.
    It uses orange for the outdoor signs and green for the interior.
    Orange makes people hungry and think warm and comfortable place.
    I become hungry when I see the orange signs such as Yoshinoya and McDonald .
    Impression that green gives nature and healthy.
    So, the lady prefer and could come easily.
    I want my customers will be full.

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    1. 6. Also, orange gives...
      I=> People/Many people
      the lady=> female customers

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    2. Many people become hungry when they see the orange signs such as Yoshinoya and McDonald.
      Also, green gives the impression of nature and healthy.
      So, female customers prefer and could come easily.

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  11. My company's name is Shoes house.
    The shop sells various running shoes.
    I use white and blue for this shop.
    White is a clean color so customers think it's a reliable shop.
    And also white is a simple color.
    If the wall is white, shoes color is outstanding.
    The sky is blue and customers want to run in the blue sky.
    So, I decided to use white and blue for my company.

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    2. If the wall is white, shoes shows the color clearly.

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