2018年1月13日土曜日

Main Ideas-Sr.2-Jan.13th

Write the main ideas of the text in three sentences.
- Introduction
- Why young adults moved to cities:
- A changing way of life:

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  1. The traditional way of life in china is changing in the last 50 years.
    Young adults that moved to cities earned more money than farmers earned so they afforded to assist their aging parents.
    China expects that nearly 60 percent of people live in cities by 2020 and new cities may built near the farming areas.

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    1. Well summarized.
      2. ... than farmers did to afford ...
      3. ... may be built...

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  2. In Cnina, young adults began moving to the cities to seek jobs.
    They prefer working in the cities to farming because they wanted to more money to buy modern things.
    To grow Chinese economy, Chinese traditional way of life is changing to a modern way of life.

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    1. Well summarized.
      2. They moved to cities from their farm lands to earn ...
      3. Chinese ... because of this migration to cities.

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  3. Most people in China were fermers and did hard physical work.
    In the last 50 years, young adults began to move cities to seek new jobs caused by the government plan.
    More people works in factory, so cities and economy are getting develop.

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    1. Pay attention to grammar.
      2. ...move to cities... because of the government plan.
      3. As more people live and work in cities, their economy has grown.

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  4. Faming was the traditional way of life for chinese people, but now many young adults seek jobs in a city to help their parents or buy modern things..
    City jobs are easier than farming ,and many yong adults can earn more more money than farming .
    Chenese goverment thinks 60% of people will lives in cities and economy will be more growing.

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    1. Well summarized and written.
      2. Factory jobs in cites are physically less demanding and financially more awarding than farming.
      3. ... estimates that ...

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  5. Intro: China’s traditional lifestyle is changing because young people who live in farms want to work in a city.
    Why young adults moved to cities: They find via TV that physically easier and financially more rewarding jobs are available in cities that are promoted by the government.
    A changing way of life: Many of such young people move to cities to work in factories, produce competitive products in the world and help grow the local economy.

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