2018年3月7日水曜日

Summary-Inside Reading-Sr.3-Mar.7

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The world population has grown to over seven billion people, and more people live in large cities than in the past.
People look for jobs in big cities because they have more businesses, ports, transportation, and educational institutes.
As more people move into cities, the land prices rise, and taller buildings are constructed to accommodate the new residents and businesses.
New systems to provide services, such as water, electricity, and trash collection and disposal, are needed to cope with increasing population.
Also, traffic and air pollution problems caused by increased number of cars on the streets need to be dealt with.
As more people live and work in large cities, these growing problems need to be solved.

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  1. Cities growing because four reasons.
    There are big business center, port, transportation center, large school.
    But cities have some problems.
    One is citie have some limited land area, but population is growing.
    So builders have to break old small building and built new tall building that have large living space.
    The other is they have to design the system to provide water and electricity and collect tons of trash and disposing it.
    The last one is growing people means growing the numbers of traffic, that cause air pollution.
    And old streets isn't enough big today because number of traffic is increasing.

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    1. Well summarized.
      Correct all the subject-verb agreements.

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    2. Cities are growing because of four reasons.
      There is a big business center, port, transportation center, and large school
      However, cities have several problems.
      One is that big cities have limited land space while more people are moving in.
      So builders have to demolish old, small buildings and construct tall ones that offer larger space.
      Another problem is that new systems are needed to provide water and electricity, and collect tons of trash and dispose it.
      Also, as more people move in, more traffic and air pollution are created.
      Unfortunately, old streets aren’t wide enough for the increasing traffic.

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    3. Cities are growing because four reasons.
      There are big business center, port, transportation center, and large school.
      But cities have some problems.
      One is citie have some limited land area, but population is growing.
      So builders have to break old small building and build new tall building that have large living space.
      The other is they have to design the system to provide water and electricity and collect tons of trash and disposing it.
      The last one is growing people means growing the number of traffic, that cause air pollution.
      And old streets isn't big enough today,because the number of traffic is increasing.

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    4. Cities are growing becouse for reasons.
      There are big buniness centers, ports, transportation and educational institutes.
      However, big cities have some problems.
      One is they have only limited land area so that they need to constract taller buildings.
      The other reason is that growing people lead to hevy trafic, also air pollution.
      And old streets can't deal with this problem.

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    5. Cities are growing because there are four reasons,big business center,ocean port, transportation center and large school.
      However cities have some problems.
      One is that cities have some limited land area, but population is growing. Builders have to break old small buildings and construct new tall buildings that have a lot of living spaces.
      THe other is they have to design the system to provide water and electricity and collecting tons of trash and disposing it.
      The last one is growing people means growing the number of traffic, that cause air pollution.
      Also old streets aren't big enough today because the number of traffic is increasing.

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    6. Cities are growing because of four reasons.
      There are big business center, port, transportation center, and large school.
      But cities have some problems.
      First, cities have limited land area, but the population is growing.
      So builders have to break old and small building and built new tall building that have large living space.
      Second, they have to design the system to provide water and electricity and collect tones of trash and disposing it.
      The last one is growing population, which means growing the traffic, that cause the air polution.
      Also the old streets are not big enough for today's heavy traffic.

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    7. Cities are growing because of four reasons.
      There are big business center, port, tranceportation center and large school.
      But cities have some problems.
      One is cities have some limited land areas, but the population is growing.
      So builders have to break old small buildings and build new tall buildings that have large living space.
      The other is they have to design the system to provide water and electricity and collect tons of trash and disposing it.
      The last one is growing people means growing the number of traffics, which cause air pollution.
      And old streets aren't big enough today because the number of traffics is increasing.

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    8. Cities are growing because of four reasons.
      There are business center, port, transportation center and large school.
      But cities have some problems.
      One is cities have some limited land area, but population is growing.
      So builders have to break old small buildings and build new tall buildings that have large living space.
      The other is design is needed for the sistems to provide water and electricity, and collect tons of trash and dispose of it.
      The last one is growing the number of people means growing the number of traffic that cause air pollution.
      And old streets is not wide enough today because the number of traffic is increasing.

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    9. Why cities are growing have four reasons.
      There are major business centers, ports, transportation centers and large schools.
      But growing cities have some problems.
      One is that the land area is limited, but the population continue to grow.
      So, building constructors have to demolish the old and small building such as one-story apartment, and built new tall buildings which have large living space.
      The other is they have to design the system to provide water, electricity, and collect tons of trash and dispose it.
      The last one is growing people means growing a number of traffic at that it cause air ollution.
      And, old streets isn’t big enough.

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  2. The world population is drowing. Population of cities are larger. It make benefits and also problems. Benefits are the big city can be business center, can get good job in big city, convenient transportion, can get good education. On the other hands, it is dificult to designed tons of trash. And also grawing city population mean a lot of cars, buses, trucks in the street make serious air population.
    In concluding, the world pupulation is still growing. So we supporse to solve these problems.

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    1. Well summarized.
      Pay attention to the spelling and usage of phrases, such as on the other hand and in conclusion.

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  3. The cities are growing by moving people from farms and towns.
    Big cities are center of major business and some of them are major ocean port, so people can get good jobs and enogh money to support them.
    Also people visit big cities because they are major and convenient transportation centers.
    And there are large universities and technical schools that attract students.
    However, they face several problems by cities becoming large.
    First, about the construction, there is no areas to live and work, so the building becoming higher, and systems of providing water and electricity is becoming complex.
    Another problem is the air, growing cities means increasing traffic and the heavy traffic cause smoke and serious air polution.
    A growing cities by growing world's population are continuing to make major problems.

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    1. All the key points are covered.
      2, 3, 4: too much detail=> You can write in two sentences.
      6, 7: Are there only two issues? => Clarify the three issues.

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  4. More people move to big cities for the purpose of finding jobs or studying.
    Big cities are center of business, international trade and transportation so that there are advantage to live in.
    However,Big cities have several problems becouse of the increase of population.
    First, they need to constract higher buldings due to lack of space.
    Second, they need to design complex systems to provide necessarily things to many people.
    Smog is a also major problem that caused by vehicles.
    Some cities restrict the use ofautomobiles to deel with this problem.

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    1. Very well summarized and written.
      5. ..., such as water ...
      Pay attention to Singular/Plural usages.

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  5. there are reasons why cities are growing.
    those are people to find the jobs in the city, transport and schools.
    But growing the city has problems such as space, probiding water and air pollution.
    That’s why small island is becoming expencive,and buildings are constracted on many times.

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    1. Points are well covered but not explained enough.
      2. Write those problems more spacifically.

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  6. cities are growing because big cities are the center of business and made ocean ports and tranceportation,
    People move to cities from small towns or farms to get jobs that pay enough money to live themselves or familes.
    Also,there are large universities and technical schools.
    However,city has some problems to live.
    First,land spaces are limited and become expensive to buy .
    Builders have to construct very tall buildings in a small space that enable to provide many living spaces .
    Second,designing complex systems such as water and electricity is necessary to build new houses.
    Third,A lot of cars cause traffic accidents and air polution.

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    1. Well summarized.
      1. One reason cities are growing is ...
      3. Howver, big cities have some porblems.

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  7. Cities are grown by gethering a lot of people such as business centers, ocean ports, transpotation centers and large universities and technical schools in there.
    However, big city has several problems.
    First, there are many vertical buildings because of high land rent.
    Second, it's difficult to provide electricity and collect trash in a safe way.
    Finally, the larger population in the city, the more pollution and traffic problems happen.
    A growing city will have to solve these major problems.

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    1. Well summarized.
      3. => However, many tall buildings are constructed by removing old houses and buildings because of the high land price.

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  8. The big cities' population is increasing because they are major business concern, ocean ports and tranceportation concern and they have large univercities.
    As cities grow, they have several problems.
    First, many people live in a limited area.
    The old building is removed and the new buildings become tall.
    The another ploblems is they have designing and installing complex cystems.
    The efficient system must be designed for collesting tons of trush and disposing of it insafe way.
    Finally, they have serious air pollution because of many cars. trucks and buses in the streets.

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    1. Points are well covered.
      4.=> Old buildings are removed and new tall buildings are constructed to provide more space.

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  9. Recentry, cities are growing lareger, and there are reasons why a lot of people are moving cities from farms and towns.
    Big cities are major business centers, ocean ports and transportation centers,
    So many people are needed for works and They can find a good salary job, and live or enjoy visiting.
    Also, there are large universities and technical schools.
    However, they face several problems.
    A small plot of land is expensive because a lack of space that large numbers of people can live, so buildings became tall and vertical.
    Another problems is how design and install complex systems to provide services such as water and electricity to large areas.
    And, the traffics are filled with many cars and buses, and the smoke from these vehicles causes serious air pollution.
    The cities will grow, so we have to find solutions.

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    1. Well summarized. But you wrote nine sentences.
      1, 2=> .... because they have major business ....
      3. People can find good jobs and enjoy better lives.

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