2018年4月25日水曜日

Writing-Sr.3-Apr.25

Write why the blogger hates machines in 3~4 sentences. 
When she needed assistance to get the Internet connection/access for her apartment, she got recorded messages, was transferred, put on hold and even hung up. 
It took two weeks to get the problem solved. 
She was also frustrated and embarrassed when she used a self-service checkout machine at the supermarket. 
(50 words)

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  1. She hates mashine because it made her being embarrassed many times.
    Machine calling kept her waiting for a long time and didn’t solve her problem.
    Self buying system didn’t work well and people around her misunderstood that she put items into her bag before scanning.
    She prefers the past days that not machine but people helped her.

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  2. The blogger hates machines becouse automated voice disturbed blogger to ask about internet connection problem to real person.
    In addition, automated voice told that the conncection was ok, but there wasn't.
    The self service checkout system also annoyed blogger becouse it didn't work.
    Blogger thought everyone looked blogger as stupid by the machine.


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  3. She couldn't connect Internet at her new house, so she called the phone company.
    But she had to wait for half an hour to talk to a real person.
    Also, while she was waiting, an automated voice recording told her unnecessary things.
    Finally she solved her problem but it took her two weeks, and she thought voice activated systems waste time.

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    1. What about the experience in the supermarket?

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  4. The writer was listening to recordings and machines and waiting on hold after 18 hours phone company solve her phone ploblem.
    She scans her items to the machines but she can't and the computer sits there stupidly and does nothing in the supermarket.
    She thinks that the telephone isn't only timesaving technology and the computer waste her time.

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  5. The blogger hates machine because machines did not work correctly .
    First, it took long time to fix DSL connection because the phone company did not help kindly and he had to talk wiht automated system.
    Second, self checkout system in the supermarket did not work well .

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    1. 2, 3 Write the problems more specifically.

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  6. She hates the machines because they waste the time.
    Machenes told her what she had already done and said the same imformation again and again when she wanted help.
    It made her furious because it mustn’t have taken so long time if people pesponsed instead .

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    1. 2, 3 Describe the situation more specifically.

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  7. She has two reasons to hate machines.
    First, she couldn't connect to the internet for a long time.
    Second, she wanted to relay on a real person but she always dealt with machines or automated voices.
    That's why she was irritated by machines.

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  8. In the case of fixing machines like the telephone and the connection, only asking by a machine couldn’t solve the problem.
    And, the voice-activated systems had the blogger lost a lot of times.
    Also, a new self-service checkout system caused trouble,and it frustrated for her.
    She thought machines does not necessarily operate correctly at all time, and real people to help is more speedy.

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    1. 1. Describe the situation more specifically.

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  9. When the blogger moved to new house, she tried to connect DSL, and she couldn't.
    She called phone company but automated voice didn't help her and she wasted a lot of time to solve this problem.
    Also, when she went to supermmarket with new digital checkout system, it didn't work correctly, all motions were late.
    She hates mashines because they don't help us as a real person.

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    1. Well summarized.
      4. ... like a real person does/people do.

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