Writing
If there were only one subject for the entrance exam, which subject would you choose? Why?
Be reminded that this is not only for you but for everyone.
1. Write your answer in four to six sentences.
2. Then write another paragraph how you would study it.
Post your writing by 10pm on December 31st
I choose English if I have to take only one subject for the entrance exam.
返信削除First, people are accustomed to English from an early age in these days.
For example, I have an English class since I was a fifth grade elementary student, and recently, it seems that most of elementary students study English from third grade.
Second, English is easy to acquire.
It’s a ‘’word’’ ,not all is memorizing like history.
For these reasons, I choose English.
I study it in a way to listen, speak and write.
I read textbooks aloud and memorize important words and sentence structures.
Also, I can study it through watching foreign movies, singing English songs and listening foreign radios.
And, I’m planning to write an English diary.
1. You should answer why "you" would choose English, not in general.
削除I have an English class since...=> I've studied English since ...
word=> language
2. You need to use "will" or "would."
I would choose chemistry.
返信削除First, it is the most favorite subject of all.
I think it’s better to learn about what I like.
Second, the job which I want to get in the future used chemical knowledge.
If I studied chemistry for entrance exam, what I learned would help my future.
For these reasons, I would choose chemistry.
First, I would acquire chemical basic knowledge, such as element symbol, chemical formula and so on.
Second, I would apply them.
Also, I think I would need calculating ability, so I would practice it to calculate fast and exactly.
1. Don't use "I think" to explain what you think.
削除5th sentence=> ... it would ...
2. basic chemical knowledge. symbols, formulas/formulae
Second, I would apply them<= ?????
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削除I would choose chemistry.
First, it is the most favorite subject of all.
It is better to learn about what I like.
Second, the job which I want to get in the future used chemical knowledge.
If I studied chemistry for entrance exam, it would help my future.
For these reasons, I would choose chemistry.
First, I would acquire basic chemical knowledge, such as element symbols, chemical formulas and so on.
Second, I would study more difficult things.
Also, I think I would need calculating ability, so I would practice it to calculate fast and exactly.
I would choose English ,if there were only one subject for the entrance exam.
返信削除First, English is necessary for us to comunicate with foriegn people.
It is the most important subjects of all ,and we have to study.
Second,entrance exam have to be faired .
We can improve English skill when we study hard.
For these reason,I choose English.
I would study nomative grammer on text books at first ,and reading sentences aloud. Then I study them again and again until remembering all of them.
1. Which is the first SS, the second or the third sentence?
削除The fourth sentence, or the second SS, is unclear.
2. It's important to learn basic grammar but it isn't enough to realize the reasons you stated in task 1.
I would choose English,if there were only one subject for the entrance exam.
削除First,English is necessary for us t ocommunica te with foreign people.
It is the most important subjects of all ,and we have to study.
Second,entrance exam have to be faired .
We can improve English skill if we study harder .
I choose history, if there are only one subject for the entrance exam.
返信削除First, today's world became dangerous.And some people say history repeats.
So, I think we have to learn history to think what will be began in the world.
Second, in history, many people think what is the best choice, and they did what they think the best.
So, if you want to became the person who move world, learning history is the good way to became it.
I world memorise about print if we have, and after that or if we haven't, read the textbook and learn the event and there reason.
1. Don't use "so" SS first and explain.
削除2. Unclear. Weite in two or three sentences.
I choose history, if there are only one subject for the entrance exam.
削除First, today's world became dangerous.And some people say history repeats.
I think we have to learn history to think what will be began in the world.
Second, in history, many people think what is the best choice, and they did what they think the best.
If you want to became the person who move world, learning history is the good way to became it.
I world memorise about print if we have.
After that or if we haven't the print, read the textbook and learn the event on the history and there reason.
After that, I check paint and picture in the textbook because it make there models to memorise easyer.
I would choose math, if there were only one subject for the entrance exam.
返信削除First, there is only one answer for each question.
It is clear the answer is correct or wrong.
I feel refreshed when my answer is correct.
Second, it is easy to understand because it is represented with formulas.
We can solve problems easily by using them even difficult problems .
I would remember formulas and solve problems again and again until I can remember how to solve it.
1. Revise the 3rd sentence.
削除2. until I remember<= don't use "can" unless it's necessary in English.
I would choose biology.
返信削除First, I’m interested in biology the most.
The more I’m interested in, the more I want to study.
Second, biology is important for the life.
I can learn environment issues, influence of the food for child, importance of the life and so on.
That’s why I would choose biology.
It is improtant for studying biology to understand deeply.
I would solve a lot of questions many and many times.
1. There is one SS. => (1)TS (2)SS (4)SD (5)SD (3)SD (6)CS
削除2. Answer first, then explain.
understand what???
Second, biology helps our life.
削除I can learn environment....
I would choose english.
返信削除First, english is used in many countries.
In the future, we have to use english at the company.
Second, if I can speak english, I can expand our world experience.
And also, we can travel the world more enjoyably.
So, I would choose english.
I would study grammar and talk to the native teacher.
I would choose English.
削除First, English is used in many countries.
In the furture, we have to use English at the office.
Second, if I can speak English, I can expand our world experience.
And also, we can travel the world more enjoyably.
So, I would choose English.
I would study basic grmmer. And next, I would study writting and listening
I would choose history.
返信削除First, this subject help me in many times.
For example, I can enjoy trip more by knowing history.
Second, I can learn what happend and what would be like.
It teachs me how to consist the world.
Third, knowing people's life is interesting.
I study with making my note.
I paste graph and map and write interesting things that aren't well known.
It's very fun to make own note.
I would choose math, if there were only one subject for the entrance exam.
返信削除First, I like math the most.
I can study deeply what subject I like.
Second, math is used a lot of scene in our life.
For example, we must record household account book when we become adult.
Becuse of two reasons, I would choose math.
I would memorize formulas.
Then I solve many plobrems while I use formulas.