[What] The Tour de
France is a men’s bicycle race (that has been) held annually since 1903.
[Place] There are 21
stages in the race to ride about 3,500 kilometers around France
over 23 days period, including the Alps and Pyrenees mountains.
[Competition] The timed race is competed
by 20-22 teams, each has eight riders, in each segment and the total tour.
Tour de France is an annual men's bicycle race that's about 4,000 km or 2,500 miles.
返信削除It's held in France and the course is designed to run through mountains and town.
There're about 20 teams every year and they fight in 20 stages or parts.
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Tour de France is annual men's multiple stage biicycle race held in France or nearby country.
返信削除The race is divided into 20 stages and the length of the cource is about 4,000 kilometers or 2,500 miles.
The competition is held with twenty teams which has eight members.
Very well summarized and written.
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Tour de France is the men’s bicycle race which is usually held in France every July.
返信削除The tour consists of 21 stages and its whole distance is about 3,500 km(2,200 miles).
About 20 teams which has eight riders in each race this long distance for over 23 days.
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削除#1 a, not the, which is held in Franch in July every year.
Tour de France is a bicycle race that held in every July.
返信削除They race in 21-23 corse in France and other around country also included Phyrenees and Alps.
The race is time trial and 20-22 teams who each has 8 members join the tour.
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削除Tour de Franceis the man's bicycle race thet held in France every year.
返信削除The race has to ride over 3500kilometers,they ride around France,and it takes them to 23days.
The raceusually consists
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Tour de France is an annal men’s multiple stage bicycle race.
返信削除It was held in France and it is always about 4000 kilemeters, or 2500 miles through towns, u steep mountains, and across flat lands.
It’s consists of 21 day-long over the cours of 23 day and people from all over the world take participate in it.
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Tour de France is an annual men's bicycle race.
返信削除It is held in France and finish on the Champs-Elysees in Paris.
It is the time trial race
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削除Tour de France is a bicycle race for men.
返信削除It is 3500 kilometers over 23 days period.
There are about 20 teams with 8 riders each.
Look at others' and the model for your reference.
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