B. Plan/p.167: Write an opinion essay about nature
in your city/town/neighborhood.
Try using a variety of sentences.
Introduction: Write an introduction. Then clearly
state your opinion.
Main Body: two or three reasons to support
your opinion with the fact/example/explanation.
Conclusion: Restate, rephrase, and
reemphasize your opinion in one or two sentences.
[Intro] I live in Ome, a small city located on the northwest edge of
Tokyo. A good part of the city is surrounded by the Tama Mountains, which
provide us with clean air and water. I think Ome offers a wonderful nature that
is enjoyed by both residents and visitors at ease.
[Body] First, Ome is about an hour away from downtown Tokyo by train. (Convenience) => SD/Example Second, we can enjoy nature in just a ten-minute walk from the JR train
stations. (Easy access for everyone) => SD/Example In addition, parks and walking trails are well-maintained and easily
accessible. (Easily enjoyable)=> SD/Example
[CS] Though Ome is part of Tokyo, it is full of nature that is enjoyed by
anyone without difficulty.
Akinari
返信削除I live in Musashino City. It takes about 30 minutes from Tokyo Station. There are many shops, and there is a beautiful park where we can enjoy nature.
First, we can enjoy shopping in Kichijoji. There are many different kinds of shops, so we can find almost anything there. We can spend a whole day shopping and eating there. The city also has a famous park called "Inokashira Park" where we can enjoy beautiful nature. We can see many birds throughout the year and cherry blossoms in spring. We can even ride a swan boat.
Musashino is not only a great place to shop, but also a good place to enjoy nature.
You should write an opinion essay about nature in your place. What is your opinion? "there is/are ..." states a fact, but not an opinion.
削除I live in Mitaka city, which is located in near the center of Tokyo. A good point of the city is good trafficking and greener seeing.
返信削除First, Mitaka is easy to access metropolis such as Shinjuku or Tokyo. It only takes about 20 minutes to get to Shinjuku by Chuo train because its express train stops at Mitaka station. Second, both children and seniors be able to enjoy playing in the parks. Mitaka has many small parks, and the largest one is Inokashira Park. It is famous for its beautiful cherry blossoms. It provides us with beautiful view and good tourism resources.
Mitaka is a beneficial and amusement city to live and visit.
You should write an opinion essay about nature in your place. What is your opinion about your place? What do you mean by "trafficking"?
削除I live in Mitaka City, which is located near the center of Tokyo. One of the city’s main advantages is its convenient transportation system and rich natural environment.
削除First, Mitaka offers easy access to major urban areas such as Shinjuku and central Tokyo. It takes only about 20 minutes to reach Shinjuku via the Chuo Line, as express trains stop at Mitaka Station. Second, the city provides a relaxing environment for people of all ages. Both children and senior citizens can enjoy spending time in parks, especially Inokashira Park, which is well known for its cherry blossoms in spring.
This balance between urban convenience and natural beauty makes Mitaka an attractive place to live and visit.
I live in Mitaka, which is close to both city and nature. However, trees or some plants have decreased bacause the number of buildings has increased due to urban development. I think Mitaka should increase natural areas.
返信削除First, there are large number of elderly people and children in Mitaka, but they do not have plenty of areas to exercise. Mitaka has too much shopping mall or buildings, so it is necessary to create more parks. Second, connections between people in Mitaka have been weakening. Natural parks make people feel safer and decrease crimes.
Creating natural areas in Mitaka is important for everyone to live safely and stay healthy.
Clear introduction and the body support it well.
削除Shizuka
返信削除I live in Chitosedai. I think my city has enough nature and trees.
There is a huge park called Roka Park near where I live. The park is 8.3 hectares in size, and it has a dog park, a lawn, and many kinds of trees. In addition, many of the streets in my city are planted with trees and shrubbery. Because of a law requiring green spaces, the city is required to create green areas.
Due to these laws and the current situation, I think my city already has enough nature.
Well structured and written. Where is Chitosedai?
削除I live in Chitosedai, a quiet residential area in Setagaya, Tokyo. I think my city has enough nature and trees.
削除There is a huge park called Roka Park near where I live. The park is 8.3 hectares in size, and it has a dog park, a lawn, and many kinds of trees. In addition, many of the streets in my city are planted with trees and shrubbery. Also, there are many schools in the area, so nature and trees are a familiar part of daily life. Because of laws that require green spaces, the city is required to create and maintain green areas.
Due to these laws and the current situation, I think my city already has enough nature.