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Scientists found that bacteria cause infectious diseases, developed the ways to prevent them from infections and created medicine to cure infectious diseases.
Leeuwenhoek discovered bacteria in 1676 that cause diseases. Scientists didn’t know how to cure diseases but tried to prevent them.
Pasteur developed a way to make milk safe to drink by heating it to a high temperature to kill the bacteria in the milk. He also found that carbolic acid could destroy bacteria.
Lister put Pasteur’s idea into practice. He sprayed carbolic acid on surgery tools, patients’ skin, and bandages to prevent infections.
Fleming found fungus could destroy bacteria and developed medicine called penicillin for patients to swallow.
Scientists found that bacteria cause infectious diseases, developed the ways to prevent them from infections and created medicine to cure infectious diseases.
Leeuwenhoek discovered bacteria in 1676 that cause diseases. Scientists didn’t know how to cure diseases but tried to prevent them.
Pasteur developed a way to make milk safe to drink by heating it to a high temperature to kill the bacteria in the milk. He also found that carbolic acid could destroy bacteria.
Lister put Pasteur’s idea into practice. He sprayed carbolic acid on surgery tools, patients’ skin, and bandages to prevent infections.
Fleming found fungus could destroy bacteria and developed medicine called penicillin for patients to swallow.
Four scientists related to leaning of bacteria.
返信削除First, Antony van Leeuwenhoek observed bacteria but he didn't know how to cure diseases.
Second, Louis Pasteur found that bacteria in the milk could be destroyed to use the heating process.
Third, Joseph Lister found that acid spray was very effective in preventing infections.
Finally, Alexander Fleming noticed to use the penicillin is the good way to destoryed bacteria.
They found cures for illnesses and infections caused by bacteria.
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削除1. => ... contributed to find and fight against bacteria.
3. => by the heating process
After Antony van Reeuwenhoek had found bacteria, scientists tried to prevent terrible diseases.
返信削除In 1859, Louis Pasteur found they could destroy harmful bacteria in the milk by heating process which was called pasteurization.
He thought that they could use the process in other situations.
In the same year, Joseph Lister who was a surgeon analyzed Pasteur’s ideas.
He noticed that the acid spray was the good way to prevent infections.
These developed ways were good, but they couldn’t use it to humans who were already ill.
In 1928, Alexander Fleming noticed that penicillin could destroy bacteria and it wasn’t harmless to humans.
After that, penicillin has cured many diseases.
The main points are well covered and well organized.
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6. not necessary.
7. wasn't harmless=> was harmless
8. ... was used to cure...
First, van Leeuwenhoek found bacteria in 1676.
返信削除But scientists didn't know how to prevent infections.
Second, Pasteur and Lister found how to prevent infections in 1860s.
But docters couldn't found how to cure infected patients those days.
Last, Fleming found penicillin in 1928.
It's a medicine which kill bacteria and harmless to humans.
Finally, docters found how to cure diseases that caused by bacteria.
The main points are well covered and well organized.
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7. that was caused by ...
After Antony van Leeuwnhoek first observed bacteria in 1676.
返信削除It took nearly two 200 years to link to deseases that humans suffered from.
In 1859, Louis pasteur depeloped pasteurization and it could make people safe to drink milk.
In thouse days, many patients died after they had taken surgery.
Joseph Lister found the ways to prevent infections bu spraying acid.
Scientists tried to find ways to cure people who were already ill.
In 1928, Alexander Fleming found penicilin that destroy bacteria but not hurmfull to humans.
Points were well covered.
削除2. Not necessary.
3. and it could=> that made milk safe to drink
7. but not ...=> that is not ...
Long time ago, the did not know why the infections or diseases were caused.
返信削除In 1676, Antony van Leeuwenhoek first observed bacteria and scientists tried to find the way to prevent diseases.
In 1859, Louis Pasteur found the way to make milk safe to drink.
He found the way to destroy bacteria in high temperature, called pasteurization and also the way to destroy them by using carbolic acid.
Joseph Lister wondered if the cemicals could prevent infections in surgery patiants and he tried the carbonic acid as spray.
But scientists did not know how to cure the people who were already ill from diseases.
In 1928, Alexander Fleming found penicillin that can destroy the bacteria but is not harmful for humans.
The main points are well covered.
削除1, 2=> Until ... people hadn't known ...
3, 4=> In 1859, Louis Pasteur found the way to make milk safe to drink by ...
5. ... found the way to ... by ...
Antony Van Leewenhook first observed bacteria in 1676.However,no one knew what are bacteria .Nearly 200 years later,Scientists learned that bacteria were linked to many of the terrible diseases but they didn't know how to cure these disease.
返信削除In 1859,Louis Pasteur found that bacteria could be destroyed whenever they were heated to a high temperature.Joseph Lister fould the way that acid spray prevents infections in surgery patients.In 1928, Alexander Fleming developed Penicillin that cures people who were already ill from a disease.Now,there are many medicines that destory harmful bacrteria.
The main points are well covered and well organized.
削除2. Not necessary.
4. whenever=> bacteria in milik could be destroyed when it was heate...
5. ... found that acid spray...
... were infected by bacteria
Long ago, people did not know that bacteria existed.
返信削除Antony van Leeuwenhoek first discovered bacteria, and scientists tried to find the way to prevent diseases.
In 1859, Louis Pasteur made milk safe to drink by heating process, and he found the other way to destroy bacteria by carbolic acid.
Lister tried to use the carbolic acid to prevent infections, and it was very effective.
Scientists knew the way to prevent harmful diseases, but they did not know how to cure people who were already ill from diseases.
In 1928, Alexander Fleming found that penicillin could destroyed bacteria without harming humans.
It was put into medicines.
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削除1,2=> Poeple hadn't known ... until A.V.L. discovered bacteria in ...
3. ... heating process. (no need for the rest)
4. Lister used ...
Leewenhoek discovered bacteria in 1676 ,and then scientists developed ways to prevent many diseases ,but they didn't know how to cure them .
返信削除Patuer developed a way to destroy bacteria by heating high temperture ,and he also had another ideas to prevent diseases by using a caboric acid.
Lister ,who is a surgeon, tried pasteur's idea in practical and he used the carbolic acid to prevent infections in surgery patients.
First,he sprayed a weak mix of acid on a patient's skin and then he sprayed it on the bandages.
Fleming noticed that fungus destroyed bacteria ,and he made medicine called penicillin.It could cure many diseases and it is also called antibiotic.
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削除2. bacteria in milk.
... , and he also...<=not necessary
3.4 => A surgeon Lister used ... by spraying ...
5. could cure=> coured
In 1676, Antony van Leeuwenhoek first found bacteria but scientists didn't know how to cure.
返信削除They tried to develop ways to prevent many of thses diseases.
In 1859, Louis Pasteur found how to way to destroy bacteria in milk.
Joseph Lister, who was a surgeon, analyzed Pasteur's ideas.
He found that the acid was very effective in preventing infections.
Scientists had developed several effective ways to prevent vacteria.
In 1928, scientist Alexander Fleming noticed a reaction on a fungus, which was penicillin.
Soon penicillin was put into medicines for patients.
The main points are well covered.
削除1. ... found bacteria.
2. Scientists then tried to...
3. ... by heating ...
4.5=> A surgeon Joseph Lister used carbolic acid to ...
Antony van Leeuwenhoek first found bacteria in 1676.
返信削除Scientists learned that bacteria were linked to many terrible diseases, so they tried to develop ways to prevent them.
Louis Pasteur developed a procedure to make milk safe to drink.
He found that heating to a high temperature and carbolic acid could destroy bacteria.
Joseph Lister was a surgeon, and he put the Pasteur’ idea into practice.
He saw the acid spray was very effective in preventing infection.
Later, scientists knew the high heat and chemicals would destroy bacteria, but they didn’t know how to cure infections caused by harmful bacteria.
Alexander Fleming noticed a reaction of fungus which became penicillin.
Soon,It was put into medicines for patients.
The main points are well covered but too long!
削除3.4=> safe to drink by heating milk to a high temperature.
5,6=> A surgeon JL used ...
7. not necessary
After 200 years Leeuwenhoek first observed bacteria, scientists leaned that bacteria caused many of he terrible deseases and tried to deverop ways to prevent.
返信削除In 1859, Pasteur notice that bacteria were killed by heating to a high temperature and make milk safety for drink.
And also he had ideas for destroying bacteria in other situation that is using carbolic acid.
Lister who lived around the same time as Pasteur try to his ideas for ssurgery patients.
He saw that acid spray was effective in surgery patients by sprayed onthe surgery tools.
Scientists deveroped effective ways for terrible deseases but doctors couldn't put the way into practice.
In 1928, scientist Fleming found the fungus that bacteria were destroyed when they touched them.
That is harmless for fuman and scientists make Penicillin from the fungus.
The main points are well covered and well organized.
削除2. ... Paseur found that ... and made ...
4.5. Lister used acid spray for surgery to prevent...
6. not necessary
7, 8=> ... found that fungus killed bacteria and he me Penicillin from it.