Write an opinion paragraph about when choice is a good thing for you, people, or business with two supporting sentences (and details) and a concluding sentence.
Plan: Think of a situation when/where choice is a good thing.
Examples: ice cream, flavored drink, restaurant/school cafeteria menu, reference/workbook, mechanical pencil, face mask, pain killer, stamp, eyeglasses, smartphone, school uniform
TS: I believe customers of supermarkets like choices.
Plan: Think of a situation when/where choice is a good thing.
Examples: ice cream, flavored drink, restaurant/school cafeteria menu, reference/workbook, mechanical pencil, face mask, pain killer, stamp, eyeglasses, smartphone, school uniform
TS: I believe customers of supermarkets like choices.
SS-1: I’m the manager of a big supermarket, and customers come to my store because we sell so many products. -> SD: They don't go to smaller stores because they may not have their favorite products.
SS-2: They come to our store to get particular items. -> SD: Customers like to know that they can buy their favorite products at our store.
CS: The supermarket is successful because we offer many choices.
I think choice is a good for customers.
返信削除When they come to the supermarket, they’ll consider which product buy. = The supermarket sells a variety of the products.
To comparing one to other on, they can choose the best one.
= When they buy things, they think this is a good price but that looks better than this.
Customers can get better product to choice one.
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削除#1 is a good for=>
#2 consider=> choose product buy=>
#3 The supermarket=> Supermarkets the produts=> products #4 To comparing one to other on=> By … other products,
#5 ???=>
#6 to choice=>
I think choice is a good for customers.
削除When they come to the supermarket, they’ll choose product buy.
Supermarkets sell a variety of products.
By comparing one to other products, they can choose the best one. Products have different to others like price and flavor.
Customers can get better product to choose one when they have choice.
I believe choseing job is a good thing.
返信削除People usually change their dream while student.Many choice of job can bring interested for us.
Also, if we don't like job now, we can change new job quickly because we have many choice.We can experience many things and make a lot of network of people.
The choice of our job bring many good things.
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削除#1 a job
#2 while students=> when they …
#3 ???
#4 => If there are choices, we can …
#6 The choice => Choices for jobs will …
I think athletes like choices of their uniform number.
返信削除Uniform number shows their role and feature in the match.
By deciding the number themselves, they can feel motivated.
Also, the number leads to being a member of the team.
Athletes can do their best by having a number.
48 words. Do all sports have uniforms or numbers???
削除#1 their uniform number=> to choose the number on their uniforms
#2Uniform number=> Those numbers show the match=> their team
#3 deciding=> choosing
#4 leads to being<=???
#5 having a number=> choosing the number on their uniform
I think athletes like to choose the number on their uniforms.
削除Those numbers show the their role and feature in their team.
By choosing the number themselves, they can feel motivated.
Also, the number leads to play a match with their teammates.
Athletes can do their best by choosing the number on their uniform.
Shuntaro
返信削除I think a restaurant menu is good if it has a lot of choices.
People can select meals that they have never eaten before, so they never get board.
Also, if restaurant prepare food that all generations can enjoy eating, the number of customers will increase.
A lot of choices let all people enjoy eating.
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削除#2 => For example, if …, they can …
#3 Does this support the TS?
#4 let => will make more …
Tamaki
返信削除I believe it is better to have many choices of ice cream.
Favorite flavor or taste is different between each people. It is good to have many different kinds of flavors or taste to sell ice cream for many people.
The choice of ice cream changes by their feeling. You can change the ice cream you want to eat each time if there are many choices of ice cream.
The choices are always good things for ice cream.
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削除#1 of ice cream=> when we …
#2 between each people=> by person
#3 taste=> to sell …=> to satisfy more people
#4 => Also, people choose …
#5 => If there are …, they can …
#6 for => when it comes to
I believe it is better to have choices when we buy an ice cream.
削除Favorite flavor or taste is different by person. It is good to have many different kinds of flavors or taste to satisfy more people.
Also, people choose ice cream by their feeling. If there are many choices of ice cream, they can choose one they like each time.
The choices are always good things when it comes to ice cream.
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返信削除#2 In … most of them=> Most of junior … go to
#3 many kinds of=> a lot of from=> of
#4 In high …, they …=> High … have to … choose from …=> choose one from many … why ‘first’?
#6 => choice is … because it …
I think choice is a good thing for people.
返信削除We usually compare many things when we buy stationeries.
The store with a wide variety of things can compared by price and functions.
Also, there is a wide variety of stationeries, we can compare many different things and buy one product we really wanted.
If the store sells only a few different kinds of stationeries, we sometimes don’t buy any of them.
I think choice is a good thing for people.
削除We usually compare many things when we buy stationeries.
If the store has a lot of stationeries, we can compare them by price and functions.
Also, if store has a wide variety of stationeries, we can compare many different things and buy one product we really wanted.
If the store sells only a few different kinds of stationeries, we may not find things we wanted.