2017年10月28日土曜日

Read & Write-Sr.2-Oct.28th

Pronoungs
Note-1: he or she-> they/their/them is possible

Note-2: Gender Neutral Pronouns
Ze and hir Ze laughed I called hir Hir eyes gleam That is hirs Ze likes hirself

Ze and zir Ze laughed    I called zir Zir eyes gleam That is zirs Ze likes zirself
Xe Xe laughed  I called xem   Xyr eyes gleam That is xyrs Xe likes xemself

What do you think -B.2  
Based on the readings, why do you think that something like a movie, song, anime or book becomes popular? 
=> Write your answer in five to eight sentences.

31 件のコメント:

  1. I think a song become popular because of the numbers of downloads.
    First, we surff the internet to try to find a good song which is popular especially for young people.We decide the quality of the song from some information such as the numbers of downloads, the popular of the singer, and the reptation of the listener.
    Second, when we compare the popular of the song with the numbers of downloads.
    The popular of the song is the easiest way to decide the quality of the song.

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    1. The 1st point is well explained.
      Grammar errors, especially on the part of speech. What is the noun of popular?
      What is the second point for? It looks the same as the first one.

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    2. I think a song become popular because of the numbers of downloads.
      First,people often surff the internet to find popular songs especially for young people.We decide the quality of the song from some information such as the reptation of the listener and the numbers of downloads.
      Second,people compare the popularity of the songs with the numbers of downloads.
      We usually think the songs which is listened by many people are popular.
      The popularity of the song is the eariest way to decide the quality of the song.

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  2. I think something like movie becomes popular because of its quality.
    First, people like something interesting.
    For example, if a big company recommends a movie a lot, the movie becomes famous among people.
    But if the movie isn't interesting, it doesn't become popular.
    Some people watch or buy something for talking with friends, but it's not the same as becoming popular.
    Second, people have own interests.
    People sometimes recommend their favorite thing that the quality is good to their friends, but the friends don't usually become interesting to it.
    People usually spend their money to their favorite thing.

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    1. Very well explained, especially the first one.
      3. famous-> known to people.
      7. => People ... their friends.
      However, they don't always ...
      8. money on...

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    2. I think something like movie becomes popular because of its quality.
      First, people like something interesting.
      For example, if a big company recommends a movie a lot, the movie becomes known to people.
      But if the movie isn't interesting, it doesn't become popular.
      Some people watch or buy something for talking with friends, but it's not the same as becoming popular.
      Second, people have own interests.
      People sometimes recommend their favorite thing that the quality is good to their friends.
      However, they don't always become interesting to it.
      People usually spend their money on their favorite thing.

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  3. I think songs become popular through the social networks.
    We can know many musician from them such as Youtube.
    Also, we can guess how they are popular in the world by viewer rating.
    In the other opinion, winning a famous award is the way to be popular.
    Some awards are paid public attention.
    In thease ways, things become popular.

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    1. The first point is explained well but not the second one.
      2. We can enjoy ...
      3. ... how popular they are ...
      4. Also, ...
      5. ... are paid attention by many people.
      6. Because of A and B, ...

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    2. I think songs become popular through the sicial networks.
      We can enjoy many musician's songs from them such as Youtube.
      Also,we can guess how popular they are in the world by viewer rating.
      Also, winning a famous award is the way to be popular.
      Some awards are paid attention by many people.
      Becouse of thease reasons,things become popular.

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  4. I think something like amovie, song, or book becomes popular because people express what they like on the Internet.
    Now people can spread their idea all over the world on the Internet. Someone mentions about him or her favorite things on the Internet. Then people who see it become interested in it.
    Therefore I think this is why things become popular.

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    1. Very well written.
      2. These days, ... post their ideas on the Internet to the world.
      3.4=> When someone ..., people ...
      5. No need to write a CS for such a short paragraph.

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    2. I think something like a movie, song or book became popular because people express what they like on the Internet.
      Thesedays, people can post their ideas on the Internet to the world. When someone mentions about him or her favorite things on the Internet, people who see it became interested in it.
      Also, many peple think popularity is most important, so they are getting interested in popular things.

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  5. Social networkings make a movie becomes popular.
    Nowadays, all of us have computer or iphone and it could catch a lot of information.
    If the new movies published, we can know the title and story quickly.
    Also, friends make it becomes popular.
    We usually talk about many topics a day.
    We have to know the latest movies or news to be able to talk any themes.

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    1. Well explained but too many errors in writing.
      1. Social networking makes ... become ...
      2. Nowadays, we all have ... and can get ... from...
      3. If a new movie is released, ...
      4. ... make (what???) ..
      5. ... every day.
      6. have to???

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    2. Social networking makes a movie become popular.
      Nowadays, we all have computer or iphone and can get a lot of information from website.
      If a new movie is released, we know the title and story quickly.
      Also,friends make movie becomes popular.
      We usually talk about many topics every day.
      We have to check the latest movies or news to be able to talk any themes.

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  6. I think that something like a movie, song and book becomes popular by sharing.
    First, they are shared on the networking sites.
    Students can find easily and enjoy discussing about them with friends.
    Second, they are promoted on TV or blog of famous people.
    For example, the movie introduced by famous actor became popular among my friends.
    I think they are spreaded by sharing, and become popular.

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    1. Well explained.
      1. ... when they are shared via media, such as social networking sites or TV.
      3. ... find new ... easily ...
      They like talking about... with their friends.
      5. ... when a ..., it becomes ...
      6. Movies, ... become popular when ...

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    2. I think that something like a movie, song and book becomes popular when they are shared via media, such as social net working sites or TV.
      First, they are shared on the networking sites which many people use.
      Students can find new songs and movies easily. They like talking about them with their friends.
      Second, they are promoted on TV or blog of famous people.
      For example, when a movie introduced by famous actor, it becomes popular among my friends.
      I think they are spread by sharing, and become popular.

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  7. I think something becomes popular by the internet.
    Nowadays, people can get informations easily on the internet.
    They can know what things many people like now.
    Also, many people likes stories that seems similarly with them.
    Popular books or movies has similar point of our lives.

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    1. Try to be more specific.
      1. something=> what are they?
      2. ... information...
      3. can know=> find
      no need for "now."
      4. Correct errors!!!
      5. ? This sentence should explain 4.

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    2. I think something like a movie, song and book becomes popular by sharing on the internet.
      These days, people can get information easily, if they don't need the information.
      They find things that many people like.
      Also, many people like similar stories with their lives.
      Popular books or movies has similar point with our lives.
      I think something like a movie becomes popular by these reason.

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  8. I think a movie become populer because of the internet or TV shows.
    First, they talk their friends or family.
    If they watch interesting movie, they want to share to the other people.
    When they share some informations, they use any internet sits so a lot of people watch it.
    Second, TV shows or newspaper distributes information.
    The movie which is took any noise is distributed many information by TV shows and newspaper.

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    1. Good TS to introduce two SSs.
      2. "they"?
      ... talk about ... with ...
      3. For example, when ..., they ... it with ...
      4. => And then, they may post that information on social networking sites.
      5. ... of ...
      6. is took any noise<=???

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    2. I think a movie become popular beccause of the internet or TV shows.
      First, people who get some interesting thing talk about it with their family or friends.
      For example, when they watch interesting movie, they want to share it with other peolpe.
      And then, they may post that information on social networking sites.
      Second, TV shows or news paper distributes information of the movie.
      The movie which is distributed information a lot is taken any noise by many peoplr.

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  9. I think social networking sites make a movie popular.
    People look some comments of movies on a social networking site and then they choose the movie which they want to watch.If the movie has good comments,they usually come to watch it.On the other hand,if the movie doesn't have any good comments,they usually don't come to watch it.
    So,People can find movie trend on social networking sites easily and then they watch it.

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    1. Need more explanation.
      1. ... makes ...
      2. ... look up comments on movies on ...
      3. ... has good reviews, people ...
      4. => This is a duplicate of 3. Not needed.
      5. People ...

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    2. I think a social networking site makes a movie popular.
      People look up comments on movie on a social networking site and then they choose the movie which they want to watch.If the movie has good reviews,people come to watch it.Also,a lot of people like watching movies.They can share thier reviws with other peope who like movies too.If they introduce a new movie that they are interested,peope come to check it.
      People can find movie trend on a social networking siite and then they watch it.

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  10. I think something becomes popular by interest,
    First,People who have an interesting thing want to share it with others.
    If others agree or understand the interest ,it becomes a hit.
    Second,Popular things have own chracteristics .
    People prefer unfamiliar things and feel they are interesting.
    For these reasons,Something becomes popular because of the own potential.

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    1. What is something? Be more specific.
      2. ..., such as A or B, want ...
      3. ... agree with the opinion/posting/comment,
      it becomes a hit<= what is "it"?
      4. ... unique characteristics.
      5. Why? Needs to be explain.
      ... they are interested.
      6. potential???

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    2. I think a movie becomes popular by its interest,
      First,People who feel a movie is interesting want to share it with others.
      If others agree with the opinion ,it becomes a hit.
      Second,Popular things have unique chracteristics .
      People prefer unfamiliar things and feel they are interested.
      For these reasons,movies becomes popular because of their interests .

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