2017年10月21日土曜日

Writing-Sr.2-Oct.21st

What do you think?-2  
Write your answer in four to six sentences
Do you think that social networking sites are a good way to communicate with friends?

TS: I think social networking sites are very convenient and useful to communicate with friends.
SS-1: First, we can communicate with each other at anytime from anywhere.
SD-1:This is convenient when we try to reach or keep in touch with friends who live abroad.
SS-2:Also, social networking sites give us space where we can share messages, photos and videos.
SD-1:There are no other media that are as useful as social networking sites.
CS:Social networking sites offer great convenience to the users.  
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20 件のコメント:

  1. I think it's a good way to commnicate with friends through the social net working.
    First, we can talk with whoever we want at any time.
    we can talk with foreign people, friends who visit somewhere, strangers who have the same interests and so on.
    Second, we can share photos and movies easily.
    we can put links of sites, send some pictures we wanna share quickly.

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    1. Very well written.
      2. ... we want to ...
      3. ... who are visiting...
      5. ... we want to...<= Don't use wanna in writing.

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  2. I think that using social networking sites are a good way to communicate with friends.
    First, we can make new friends who have same interests.
    We can enjoy talking about our intersts.
    Also, it is useful for frinds who know each other.
    We can share important imformation immediately.
    That's why,I think SNS are good communication tool.

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    1. Well written.
      2. ... the same interest.
      6. Don't put "," after why

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  3. I think social networking sites are a good way to communicate with friends.
    We can cmmunicate with our friends wherever you are.When you travel,you can tell them your memories of the trip more clear.Also,when you have an emargency,you may ask for help earlier.So,It makes us more comfatable to communicate with my friends.

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    1. Well written but wrong spellings
      2. ... wherever we are.
      3. When we travel, we can tell others our ...more clearly.
      4. emergency=> need to be explained what kind.
      5. my???

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  4. I think social networking sites are a good way to communicate with friends.
    I can't talk my friends in holydays because all of my friends live far away from me.
    If we have social networking sites, we can talk anything whenever we want.
    For this reason, I think this is a good way to communicate with friends.

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    1. Follow the simple guideline.
      2.=> You need to write a SS, not SD.
      4. No need to write a CS for this short paragraph.

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  5. I think it is good way to communicate with friends.
    Using social networking sites, we can communicate whenever and wherever we want.
    Also we can spead our ideas and information all over the world.
    Therefore, I think social networking sites are good to communicate.

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    1. Well writen.
      2. ... communicate with ...
      3. Also, we can share ... with people ...
      4. Write a SD-2, instead of CS

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  6. I think that social networking sites are a good way to comunicate with friends.
    Because it is very convenient.
    If they use social networking sites, they talk whenevr they want with their friends which live far away.
    And They can share the information of their favorite things with people who haven't met yet.

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    1. Well explained.
      2. Don't start write a sentence with "Because"
      3. If we ..., we can talk .... we ... our ... who
      4. We can also ... our ...

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  7. I think that social networking sites are a good way to communicate with friends.
    First, I can chat online with friends who live in other prefectures and countries.
    I have a friend in Nagano and I keep in touch with email.
    Second, I can tell something wherever I'm in for instance.
    It is very convenient.
    Therefore, I think social networking sites are good.

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    1. Well explained.
      3. For example, ... touch with her using a social networking site.
      4->5=> 5(SS)->4(SD:example)
      For instance, I can ...
      5. I think ... are convenient to ...

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  8. I do not think social networking sites are a good way to communicate with friends.
    We need to do other things such as doing a hobby or studying.
    If we use social networking site,we spend a lot of times to do it . Connecting to unknown person is dangerous.
    We may get in trouble if we use social networking.

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    1. Good examples. Need to write a SS right after TS.
      2. This is a SD. You need SS-1
      4. Also, ...<=SS-2

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  9. Yes, I think social networking sites are a good way to communicate with my friends.
    First I can connect with them whenever and wherever we like.
    So even if my friends are in other country, we can communicate without minding time differance.
    Second it is good opportunity to practice English.
    When we communicate with foreign friends, we have to write in English each other.
    So I can learn reading and writing English that native speaker use.

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    1. No need to write "So"
      2. First, we ...
      3. ... in another country, ... communicate easily/as if we live closely.
      4. Second,
      5. ... we use English.
      6. I can learn English by enjoy reading and writing with ...

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  11. I think social networking sites are good way to communicate with friends.
    First, we can chatting with my friends wherever we live.
    We can chat not only in Japan but also in foreign country.
    Second, we can talk the thing we not want to know others.
    Because we can use chat room without others.
    You can say it's can not only SNS but also blog, but I think SNS is very conbnient.
    There are the reason that I think it's a good way.

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