Identify the main idea/topic sentence(s) of each paragraph
=> Speak the main idea of each paragraph/subtitle in one sentence.
=> Write the main ideas of the article in four to six sentences.
Artworks in museums represent the human history and are valuable to all of us.
Museums try to prevent such treasures from being stolen by various measures, such as security cameras, alarms, and secured cases.
Thieves try to steal those valuable objects from smaller museums because their security measures aren’t as sophisticated/tight/strict as large museums.
Selling stolen artworks is more difficult than stealing them because the potential buyers, usually art dealers, are warned about the theft.
Though the police try to find the stolen artworks and arrest the thieves, they don’t always succeed.
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Artworks in museums represent the human history and are valuable to all of us.
Museums try to prevent such treasures from being stolen by various measures, such as security cameras, alarms, and secured cases.
Thieves try to steal those valuable objects from smaller museums because their security measures aren’t as sophisticated/tight/strict as large museums.
Selling stolen artworks is more difficult than stealing them because the potential buyers, usually art dealers, are warned about the theft.
Though the police try to find the stolen artworks and arrest the thieves, they don’t always succeed.
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Sometimes art works and artifacts are stolen from museum collections.
返信削除Under the circumstances, museums try to stop the thieves.
But small museums can't have good security systems.
So stealing the thing is easy, but selling it is not easy.
For the consequence, many stolen collections are never found.
Key points are well covered.
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4. "the thing" <=?
Art thieves stole artifacts from museums.
返信削除Museams try to protect them to set security gards, cameras, alarm system and so on.
But thieves know big museums have great gards but small ones don’t.
They stole valuable small objects which is easy to carry,like paintings, and will sell them.
They try to sell them to small museums or art collectors after several years.
Almost all of arts can’t be found, so they commit huge crime as stealing them which isn’t too much to say the part of the history.
Points are well covered.
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返信削除Art thieves try to steal valuable artfacts from museams.
削除To prevent this, museams use many kinds of security such as guards, cameras and strong wires.
However, small museams don't have enough security and thieves know that they can steal easily, especialy small artfacts.
If they can steal artfacts, it's not easy to sell becouse museams and police try to arrest thieves.
Need one more sentence for conclusion.
削除4. Even if thieves successfully steal ...,
valiable arts are stolen by theives in musiums.
返信削除Museums try to privent thefts by several ways such as security guards ,camera and so on.
Theives tend to steal paintings or small artifacts that they can easily hide from small musiums because they don't have enough equipments to prevent thefts.
stolen art is difficult for theives to sell.
Police try to find the thieves but many times,they can't.
Points are well covered.
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4. Explain more.
Art works, which have information about past civilizations, are stolen from museums.
返信削除They are so valuable that museums use security guards, cameras and alarms to prevent thieves from stealing it
However, art thieves know that tey can steal something from small museums easily because securities are not strict.
They also know they shouldn't sell the stolen art right away not to be arrested.
Stealing art work means stealing piece of our history.
Points are well covered.
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3. something=>
4. not to be arrested=> to avoid being caught
The thief is stealing a piece of our history and culture by stealing ancient artifacts.
返信削除Therefore, museum try to prevent thefts.
Art thieves believe they can easily steal something from small museum without beeing seen.
But selling later is not easy.
Art theft is a crime that is committed against all of us.
Need to explain more specifically.
削除1. Simplify the sentence.
4. selling what?
5. Be more specific.
The thief sometimes steal history and calture from museum so museum try to protect ancient artifacts from thefts.
返信削除Art thieves think that they can steal someting art from small museum easier than large meuseum.
Thieves don't sell art which they stole at once but sell it after few years latter.
Art thieves commit a crime.
Explain more specifically.
削除1. What do thieves actually steal?
2. Why?
3. Why?
Art thieves steal valuable works of art from museums to make money.
返信削除So, museums try to prevent theft in many ways, such as they use security guards to wach the visitors and use strong wires to secure paintings.
But art thievs know that small museums aren’t under tight security against theft.
They also know they shouldn’t sell the stolen art right afer they steal.
So the police can’t find the stolen art easily.
Points are well covered.
削除3. small museums aren't under ...=> the security of small museums is ...
4. Why?
Occasionally, valuable works of art or ancient artifacts are stolen from museum collections.
返信削除Museums try to prevent collections from stealing such as using an alarm system or cameras.
Art thieves can steal collections from a small museum easily because there are not so many security guards.
Stealing paintings or small objects are easily to sell.
We lose a valuable piese of our history due to the art theft so they are commited against all of us.
Points are mostly covered.
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3. just security guards?
4. ??????