Write the main ideas of the article in four to six sentences.
The police use science to identify the criminal but they don’t always find evidence.
S. Breitwieser stole many works of art from small museums for his art collection.
When he was arrested, his mother destroyed and threw away all the items that he had stolen.
Later, the police found the evidence of his theft and arrested him, his mother, and they were sent to prison.
The police use science to identify the criminal but they don’t always find evidence.
S. Breitwieser stole many works of art from small museums for his art collection.
When he was arrested, his mother destroyed and threw away all the items that he had stolen.
Later, the police found the evidence of his theft and arrested him, his mother, and they were sent to prison.
返信削除Police always try to find the evidence to solve the crime, but sometimes there is no evidence.
This problem was happened by a bold thief.
The thief collected art that he stole from museums which were small and not seccured enough.
He continued to steal for his collection for several years, but one day he would be arrested.
When his mother heard that, she broke collected art and throw them away to help him.
At first, he wasn’t arrested because of no evidece, but after the piece of art was found, he was arrested.
Very well written.
削除1. ... sometimes they can't.
2. There is a case committed by ...
4. ... he was arrested (when ...)
1 Police always try to find the evidence to solve the crime, but sometimes they can’t.
削除2 There is a case committed by a bold thief.
4 He continued to steal for his collection for several years, but he was arrested when stealing was found.
Police can solve many crimes by using science but sometimes there is no evidence to help them solve the crime.
返信削除Stephane Breitwieser who was arrested by art theft usually stole from small museums because there were not complex security systems.
When he was arrested, his mother was try to destroy and toss the artworks to help her son.
The evedence came from the river nearby his mother's house and he was arrested also his friend and his mother sent to prison.
Need to explain what SB did.
削除1. ... they find no evidence to prove the crime.
2. Stephane Breitwieser stole ... and was caught when he tried to ...
4. ... was found in ... and he, his mother and friends were all ...
1 Police can solve many crimes by using science but sometimes they find no evidence to prove the crime.
削除2 Stephane Breitwieser stole many arts and tried to steal from a small museum because there is not complex security systems.
4 The evidence was found in the river nearby his mother's house and he, his mother and friends were all sent to prison.
Police can solve many crimes but sometimes it is hard to solve the crime because of no evidence.
返信削除Stephaane Breitwieser hided his collection in his mother's house which he sole in the museuns.
When he was arrested, his mother put his collection into the garbage and river.
Because of her action, the police couldn't find any evidence.
His collection wasn't at his mother's house but the police searched the river, they could find evidence.
Then, he, his mother and his friend were sent to prison.
Need to explain what SB did.
削除1. ... sometimes can't when they find no evidence.
2. SB stole ... and hid (NOT hided) ...
5. But later, the police ...
1. Police can solve many crimes but sometimes can't when they find no evidence.
削除2. Stephane Breitwiser stole many works of art from small museums and hide those collection in his mother's house.
5. But later,the police searched the river and could find evidence.
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返信削除Police can solve many crimes but sometimes it is hard to find evidence.
削除Stephane Breitwieser was the theif who steal artworks from small museams to increase his collection.
In 2001, he was arrested becouse guard had seen him running and found him again.
After his mother heard of the arrest, she put paintings in to kitchen garbahe disposal to hide evidence so the police coudn't find evidence first.
She also tossed weapons and sculptures in to river but pollice found them so that she was sent to prison with his son and his friends.
Sen.1-3 are well summarized but the rest is too long.
削除3. ... in the museum whose guard remembered his stealing of one of the artworks.
4. => When ... to destroy the evidence of his crime.
5. ... but there were found by the police.
Add. 6. SB, his mother and friends were caught...
In 2001, he was arrested in the museam whose guard remembered his stealing of one of the artworks.
削除When she heard his arrest, she trashed artworks to destoroy the evidence of his crime.
She tossed weapons and sculuptures in to river but there were found by the police.
SB , his mother and friends were caught and sent to the prison.
Police can solve many crimes by using science, but sometimes there isn’t evidence enough to solve the crime.
返信削除Stephane Breitwieser loved art and he stole many valuable art works to add his collection, not to sell for money.
He stole many art works include paintings and ancient weapons and hide them at his mother’s house.
When he was arrested in 2001, his mother destroyed or cut many of the art works and toss them into a garbage can and river to help his son.
But a few months later, police found some of the missing art objects near the river.
Finally he and his mother were arrested and sent to prison.
Very well summarized.
削除1. => ... enought evidence to
3. => including
4. ... tried to destroy the evidence by ...
1.Police can solve many crimes by using science, but sometimes there isn’t enough evidence to solve the crime.
削除3.He stole many art works including paintings and ancient weapons and hide them at his mother’s house.
4.When he was arrested in 2001, his mother tried to destroy the evidence by cutting and tossing many of the art works into a garbage can and river to help his son.
Police can arrest thefts by using science ,but sometimes there are no evidence to help them solve the crime.
返信削除Stephane Breitwieser stole a lot of artworks from small musiums because large musiums had complex security system.
When he was arrested,his mother destroyed the artworks and tossed them into the garbage can and the river.
Police didn't arrest him because they didn't find no evidence in his and mother's house.
They finaly found missing art objects which had been tossed by Breutwiser's mother in the river and they arrested him and his mother and friends.
Well summarized.
削除1. thefts=> are no evidence=>
2. ... because their security system ...
5. => ... objects in the river and arrested ...
Police use science to solve criminal,but sometimes there is no evidence to help them.
削除S Breitwiser stole a lot of artworks from small musiums because their security system is not as complex as large musiums.
They finaly found missing art objects in the riverr and arrested him and his mother and friends.
Police can solved many crimes by using science by finding evidence but sometimes they can't find any evidence.
返信削除Stephan Breitwieser stole from only small museums and wanted to add the stolen item to his collection.
When he arrested, his mother destroyed and tossed his collection to help him, and there were no evidence.
Few months later, police found the objects from the river where his mother tossed the stolen item into.
Finally, they could arrest him.
Well summarized.
削除1. ... find evidence to solve crimes by ...
2. stole what???
3. When he was arrested, ... to disappear/eliminate the evidence.
4. Finally, they arrested ...
1 Police find evidence to solve crimes by using science, but sometimes they can't find any evidence.
削除2 Stephan Breitwieser stole many art from only small museums and wanted to add the stolen item to his collection.
3 When he was arrested, his mother destroyed and tossed his collection tttto help him to disappear the evidence.
5 Finally, they arrested him.
Stephane Bbeitwieser loved art, so he stole many artworks to increase his collection.
返信削除He stole from small museums and displays which had few visitors and weren't secured well.
When he arrested in 2001, his mother destroyed artworks in his collection and tossed them into a garbage can and a river to help him.
Police could't find any evidence at first, but over 100 stolen pieces of art objects were found near the river a few months later.
So he and his mother were arrested.
Pay attention to verb forms.
削除1. ... from ...
2. stole what???
... where there are ...
3. he was arrestd!
4. ... but they found ...
Stephane Bbeitwieser stole many artworks for his collection from small museums and displays where there are few visitors and weren't secured well.
返信削除When he was arrested in 2001, his mother destroyed artworks in his collection and tossed them into a garbage can and a river to help him.
Police couldn't find any evidence at first, but they found over 100 stolen pieces of art objects near the river a few months later.
So he and his mother were arrested.