2018年10月25日木曜日

Write Personality-Sr.1-Oct.25

Speak the personality of your friend/family member in five sentences.
Refer to Par.2-4, Adjectives to describe personality/p.114. Use two adjectives and example(s).
2. He is adj-1 (when~).    3. Explain/Example.
4. Also/However, he is adj-2 (when~).  5. Explain/Example.

=> Write the personality of your friend/family member in five sentences. 

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  1. Rie is one of ny younger sister.
    she is shy when she meet someone that she hasn't met.
    When my friend come my house and she talked to my sister,she said nothing and didn't smile.So,I think it's boring talk with her.
    However, she is talkative when she talks with her bestfriend.
    She always talks to her long time and she looks so fun when she talk with close friends.

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    1. Well explained.
      Correct verb errors in #2 and #3.

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    2. She is shy when she meets someone that she hasn't met.
      When my friend came my house and she talked to my sister,

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    3. She always talks to her long time and she looks so fun when she talks with close friends.

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  2. 1 Hitomi is my older sister.
    2 She is very lazy.
    3 She always sleeps on her bed before and after her universty.
    4 Also, she is rebellious.
    5 She often argue with her mother or her father, because she usually resist them.

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    1. Clearly written.
      #3 "before and after ..." => when ...

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    2. Hitomi is my older sister.
      She is very lazy.
      She always sleeps on her bed when she doesn't have university.
      Also, she is rebellious.
      She often against to our parents, because she usually resists them.

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  3. Hayato is my brother.
    He is kind when he gets a good scores for his exams.
    For example, He helped my homework.
    However, he is irritable when he is tired.
    For example, he didn't talk with me when I talked to him.

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    1. Hayato is my older brother.

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    2. Well explained.
      #3 ... when ...
      #4 irritable=> irritated

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    3. When I didn't understand about my class, he taught it and helped my homework.
      However, he is irritated when he is tired.

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  4. Uta is one of my younger brother.He is four years old.
    He is shy when he meets someone for the first time.
    When I took my friends for my house,he hides behind my mother.
    How ever,he is talkative when he meets familier people.
    When he meets my friends who comes my home so many times,
    he trys to talk with my friends.

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    1. Well explained and written.
      #3 => bring ... to home, ... his/our mother.
      #4 ... meets someone he is familiar with.

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    2. #1 Uta is my younger brother.
      #3 When I bring my friends to my home,he hides behind his mother.
      #4 However,he is talkative when he meets someone he is familiar with.

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  5. Mone is my younger sister.
    She is rebellious when she has argument with mother.
    My mother often says her to go to bed early but she doesn't listen to her and stay up late to watch YouTube.
    However she is dependable for me when I take a bus.
    I sometimes miss the bus in the morning, she always tells me the time to leave home.

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    1. Well explained and written.
      #3 ... told her to ... and stays ...
      #4 dependable=> helpful

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    2. 2. She is rebellious against with our mother.
      3. My mother often told her to go to bed early but she doesn't listen to her and stays up late to watch YouTube.
      4. However she is helpful for me when I take a bus.
      5. I sometimes miss the bus in the morning so she remains me of the time.

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  6. Minaho is my older sister.
    She is always talkative. When we eat meals, she almost talking.
    Also, she is kind to our family. When I ask some question on math, she teach me very carefully.

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    1. Well explained.
      #3 ... a meal, she always/usually keeps talking.
      #4 ... others in ...

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    2. #3 When I eat a meal with my family, she always keeps talking.
      #4 Also, she is kind to me when I ask her something.
      #5 When I ask some questions on math problem, she teaches me very carefully.

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  7. Moka is one of my cousin.
    She is friendly when I and her friends talk with her. She likes talking and she always makes us amuse. However she is so rebellious for her parents. She has her own way of thinking,so she dosen't like to be instructioned by someone.

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    1. Well explained.
      #3 ... always amuses us/makes us amused.
      #4 rebelious against

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    2. Moka is one of my cousins.
      She likes talking and she always makes us amused.
      However, she is so rebellious against her parents.

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  8. Hukae is one of my friend.
    He is very friendly when we talk with him.
    He always talk with someone, so he has many friends.
    However, he is rebellious when he is angry.
    He was angry with my homeroom teacher, he brokes window.

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    1. Interesting but quite a few errors in verb forms.
      #2 ... when he ...
      #4 ... becomes violent when ...

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    2. Hukae is one of my friends.
      He is very friendly when he talks with
      He always talks with someone, so he has many friends.
      However, he is rebellious against becomes violent when he is angry.
      When he was angry with my homeroom teacher, he broke a window.

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  9. Mizuki is my older sister.
    She is lazy when she is at home.
    She always uses her smartphone and stay up late at night.
    Also, she is selfish.
    She always gets up late in the morning, so My mom is angry with her these days.

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