2022年7月14日木曜日

Writing-Jul 14

Write a paragraph describing a process to do/learn something better/faster/more ~.
1. Brainstorm: D. Synthesize/p.140 Write a process in the flow chart.
2. Write a TS (add some explanation in one or two sentences)
3. Write the Time Order Words, the process (V), and to infinitive/so that …/, you’ll
   Add another sentence (SD) to explain the process in more detail.
4. Write the conclusion in one sentence (or two): If/When you ~, you will/can …, It is ~ to …, Try …,   

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  1. This is how to remember the word in the textbook.
    First, don’t look textbook and try to work on the exercise book.
    Then if you have a question or what you don’t understand, you should read the text.
    Next, mark the text that you didn’t do at once.
    Finally, try to work on the exercise book again.

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    1. #1 the word=> new words
      #2 look textbook
      and=> but
      #3 or what you don’t understand
      #4 didn't do at once???
      CS???

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  2. How to make friends.
    Here is how to make friends easily on real world. It’s not difficult but this time, many people having hard time to make friends.
    First, you need to go out to meet human. Then, you probably encounter some community like school, company or club. When you meet someone at the first time you should show beautiful smile. Next if someone talk to you you try to ask exchange own phone numbers. Finally after back to home you send some massage to him or her and set schedule to meet one more time. That all.
    It is very simple and easy tasks.

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    1. You are missing ","or using it incorrectly.
      #1 on real world
      #2 this time
      many people having hard time
      #3 meet human
      #5 at the first time
      #6 Next if someone talk
      talk to you you try
      ask exchange own phone numbers.
      #7 after back to home
      #8 That all
      #9 It is very simple and easy tasks.

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  3. It is important to make clear purpose and problem to do something better.
    First, make clear purpose to make a goal.
    Then enroll problem to check the wall to a goal.
    Next, consider solutions, and pick up a best one.
    Finally, act the solution.
    You can do something better to make clear purpose and problem.


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    1. What is the purpose/goal for?
      #1, 2 make clear purpose
      #2 purpose to make a goal<=?
      #3 enroll<=?
      check the wall<=?
      #4 a best one
      #5 act the solution

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  4. Here is how to swim fast.
    First, relax your strength, not get nervous.
    If you get nervous and stiff, you won’t be able to swim fast.
    Then check your form of swimming and carefully to swim with good form.
    Just by changing your swimming form, your time improves.
    Next, imagine of stretching forward, not up.
    You’ll not swim fast if you’re
    Finally, reduce the number of breather.
    You need to decrease loss time, so you have to spend as much time in the water as you can.
    If you image all these points, you’ll surely swim fast.

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    1. #1 swim faster=> faster
      #2 relax your strength
      #4 and carefully to swim with good form
      #5 your time improves
      #6 stretching what?
      #7 if you're what?
      #8 breather-> breathing
      #10 image

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    2. Here is how to swim faster.
      First, relax your strength.
      If you get nervous and stiff, you won’t be able to swim fast.
      Then check your form of swimming.
      Just by changing your swimming form, your time will improve.
      Finally, reduce the number of breathing.
      You need to decrease loss time, so you have to spend as much time as in the water as you can.
      If you imagine all these points, you’ll surely swim fast.

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