2024年5月15日水曜日

Writing-May 15

Write what you like doing or want to do in 1 sentence (TS) 
  and 3 supporting sentences (SS).
I like walking in the morning. 
   It is refreshing to walk in the morning air.
   It gives me the chance to exercise. 
   Also, I can start a good day.

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  1. 匿名2024年5月15日 20:59

    Tamaki
    I like reading books.
    Reading books makes me feel relaxed.
    It is interesting to learn new things by reading books.
    I like to imagine all kinds of things about the book’s contents.

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    1. MEL School2024年5月16日 5:56

      Very well explained!
      #3 by reading books=> from books
      #4 all kinds of things=> people, places, and things written in the books

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    2. 匿名2024年5月18日 20:38

      I like reading books.
      Reading books makes me feel relaxed.
      It is interesting to learn new things from books.
      I like to imagine people, places, and things written in the books.

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  2. 匿名2024年5月15日 21:00

    Shuntaro
    I like watching football games. Watching football games make me feel excited. I often enjoy watching them on TV once a week.

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    1. MEL School2024年5月16日 5:57

      Write one more SS
      #3 often ... once a week<=???

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    2. 匿名2024年5月18日 20:38

      I like watching football games. Watching football games make me feel excited. I enjoy watching them on TV once a week. I want to go to London to see a football game someday.

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  3. Ryotaro Miura2024年5月15日 21:00

    I want to be an artist in the future.
    I like listening to music in my free time.
    Also I’m interested in learn the meaning of the song.
    Artists make me exited and surprised.

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    1. MEL School2024年5月16日 6:00

      #1 This is not the MI but an SS!!!
      #2 => #1
      #3 in learn=> in learning
      #4 artists<=?

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    2. Ryotaro Miura2024年5月18日 20:39

      I like listening to music.
      I’m interested in learning the meaning of the song.
      Also musicians make me excited and surprised.
      So I wan to be an artist in the future.

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  4. 匿名2024年5月15日 21:01

    Shizuka
    I like reading books.
    It’s always make me feel excited. Especially, reading novels is interesting for me.
    Also, books teach me how to write sentences.

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    1. MEL School2024年5月18日 19:14

      #2 It's always make me=> It ...
      #3 Especially, => I especially enjoy ...
      #4 sentences=> good sentences

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    2. 匿名2024年5月18日 20:39

      I like reading books.
      It always makes me feel excited.
      I especially enjoy reading novels.
      Also, books teach me how to write good sentences.

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  5. MEL School2024年5月16日 5:53

    Very well explained!
    #1 => a variety of
    #2 art=> artworks
    #4 goods=> souvenirs

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  6. MEL School2024年5月16日 6:02

    You want to explain why you want to go there by yourself.
    #4 => If I go there alone, I ...

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  7. MEL School2024年5月16日 6:04

    Well explained.
    #3 it=> what kind of music?
    #4 it=> music

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