Which do you prefer, a long
vacation or a few
short vacations?
Write your response in four to five sentences.
1. Answer: I prefer …
2.
Reason-1: ~ vacation … (3. Explain-1: I can …) 4. Reason-2: Also,
… (5. Explain-2: I like …)
[Long] I prefer a long vacation to a few short vacations. (=I like A more than B)
SS-1 I can travel to places that I've never been to if
I have a long vacation.
<= I like to enjoy the
scenery, cultures, and foods in different places.
SS-2 Also, I like to relax
for a long time.
<= When I have school, I rarely
have time to relax or do what I want.
[Short] 1. I prefer … I like ...
SS-1 First, it’s stressful to go back to school/work after a long
vacation.
<= 3. It takes me weeks to get used to the
daily routine.
SS-2 Also, I always think a two-day weekend is too short to do things I want.
<= 5. If I had a few short vacations, I
would enjoy a short trip with my family more often.
I prefer a long vacation to a few short vacations.
返信削除I like traveling other countries and prefectures.
= The experience of travel is very important for my future.
We can stay there long.
= I’d like to learn their own histories and eat delicious food.
43 words. Very good. Explain why a long vacation is better.
削除#1 traveling to other places in different …
#2 travel-> traveling
#3=> If …, I can … #4 own<= unnecessary
I prefer a long vacation to a few short vacations.
削除I like traveling to other places in different countries and prefectures.
The experience of traveling is very important for my future.
If I have a long vacation, I can stay there long.
If I only have short vacations, I can’t learn their histories and eat delicious food.
I prefer a few short vacation to a long vacation.
返信削除I like to enjoy the cultures, and foods, but I don't want to stay there for a long time.
I love Japanese foods, cultures, and toiles better than any other countries.
Also, I don't want to worry about my school things.
I want to relax anytime during vacation.
58 words. Explain why you prefer a few short vacations to one long vacation. What can you enjoy during short vacations?
削除#1 vacation=>
#2 why cultures and foods??? There<= where???
#3 This sentence doesn’t explain why you prefer a few short vacations.
#4 Why? When? #5 anytime<=???
I prefer a few short vacations to a long vacation.
削除I like to stay on different coutries, but I don't want to stay there for a long time.
I like to enjoy different culutres and foods, but I love Japanese foods, cultures, and toiles better than any other countries.
Also, I don't want to worry about my school things during vacation, such as homework.
I want to relax during vacation.
Tamaki
返信削除I prefer a few short vacation to a long vacation.
I want to go a place that I like in different seasons.
I can’t do that if I have a long vacation.
Also, I’m always think that only one-day weekend is too hard to do things I like with doing homework.
I want to make a long time to concentrate on doing things I like more often.
67 words. Pay attention to the basic grammar!
削除#1 vacation=> #2 go a place=>
#3 have just one …
#4 I’m always think=> with doing homework=> because I …
#5 make a long time<=??? want to have enough time?
I prefer a few short variations to a long vacation.
削除I want to go to a place that I like in different seasons.
I can’t do that if I have just one long vacation.
Also, I’m always think that only one-day weekend is too hard to do things I like with doing homework.
I want to have enough time to concentrate on doing things I like more often.
I prefer a long vacation to a few short vacations.
返信削除A long vacation can refresh myself and reduce stress.
It has good effects on my health.
Also, I can experience new things during a long vacation.
It may have an unexpected encounter with someone and somethings.
46 words. Very well explained.
削除#2 can refresh=> refreshes, reduces myself=> me/my brain
#4 “It”<= What?
=> I may be able to encounter someone or something that … during a long vacation.
I prefer a long vacation to a few short vacations.
削除A long vacation refreshes me and reduces stress.
It has good effects on my health.
Also, I can experience new things during a long vacation.
I may be able to encounter someone or something during a long vacation.
I prefer a long vacation to a short vacation.
返信削除I can travel abroad if I have a long vacation.
I like to travel and eat foods in many countries.
Also, I have many free days in a long vacation.
So, I can hang out with my friends more often.
49 words. Rewrite the second reason.
削除#1 a short vacation=> #3 many different countries.
#4/5<= You can do that in a few short vacations!
I prefer a long vacation to a short vacation.
削除I can travel abroad if I have a long vacation.
I like to travel and eat foods in many different countries.
Also, I can start something new.
I have enough time to learn something new in a long vacation.
Shizuka
返信削除I prefer a few short vacations to a long vacation.
First, we have something to go in long vacation. It’s stressful to do many homework and club activities.
Also I always think only having one day off is too short to get enough rest. If I have a few short vacations, I can not only get enough rest, but also I can read many books.
65 words. Well explained!
削除#2 we=> I,
have something to go=> can visit somewhere during a …
#3 It is …=> It’ll ease the stress from … What are club activities??? #4 one day off=> one-day weekend
#5 … rest but not …
Shuntaro
返信削除I prefer a long vacation to a few short vacations.
I can go to so many places that I have never been to and have fun with my friends and family. I want to experience a lot of things that I can’t in a short vacation.
Also, I want to relax as much as I can. I want to rest my body that I got tired by school and club activities.
71 words. Well explained.
削除#2 => go to many places
#3 that I can’t in=> that I can’t do during …
#4 much=> long
#5 => I need a long time to rest because I’m …
What are club activities???