Write a Summary of the rest of the story in six to eight sentences.
Sample Summary-1
The Hodja regrets the bargain he made with his friend because the night is freezing cold. Just about to give up, he finds a candle light about a hundred meters away and starts to imagine the warmth of the light will also warm his body. Next morning when he explains how he endured the night, his friends insist that he used that candle to warm him. The Hodja protests but can’t convince them so he agrees to invite them for dinner. When his friends arrive at his house, they aren’t served any meal for three hours. The hungry guests find a cooking pot over a single candle in the kitchen. The Hodja says if a far away candle can warm him, a candle will heat a pot a meter above it.
(131 words in 7 sentences)
Sample Summary-2
Next morning, the Hodja fails to convince his friends that he kept his promise, and agrees to invite them to dinner. When his friends arrive at his house, they find no dinner on the table but a cooking pot over a single candle in the kitchen. The Hodja says if a faraway candle can warm him, a candle will heat a pot a meter above it.
(68 words)
Sample Summary-1
The Hodja regrets the bargain he made with his friend because the night is freezing cold. Just about to give up, he finds a candle light about a hundred meters away and starts to imagine the warmth of the light will also warm his body. Next morning when he explains how he endured the night, his friends insist that he used that candle to warm him. The Hodja protests but can’t convince them so he agrees to invite them for dinner. When his friends arrive at his house, they aren’t served any meal for three hours. The hungry guests find a cooking pot over a single candle in the kitchen. The Hodja says if a far away candle can warm him, a candle will heat a pot a meter above it.
(131 words in 7 sentences)
Sample Summary-2
Next morning, the Hodja fails to convince his friends that he kept his promise, and agrees to invite them to dinner. When his friends arrive at his house, they find no dinner on the table but a cooking pot over a single candle in the kitchen. The Hodja says if a faraway candle can warm him, a candle will heat a pot a meter above it.
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Hodja go out and the weather is very cold.
返信削除But he can stay in outside all night because a candle far from a handred meters away helped him in his mind.
But his friend think the candle is the item to warm him in that case so he have to make dinner for them.
His friends cake to his house to eat dinne.
But dinner delayed because he's making it by a candle a meter away.
He finally said if a candle can warm him all night, it can make the dinner.
Correect errors in verb forms.
削除Hodja go out and the weather is very cold.
削除But he can stay in outside all night because a candle far from a handred meters away help him in his mind.
But his friend think the candle warmed him so he have to make dinner for them.
His friends go to his house to eat dinner.
But dinner was delayed because he's making it by a candle a meter away.
He finally says if a candle could warm him all night, it can make the dinner.
Hodja promise that he doesn't use any special item to keep warm.
返信削除During the night, he stare candle and imagine the warm.
He bear the cold but his friends claim that he used candle.
Finally, Hodja accepet to invite them to his house.
But he don't make dinner.
He thinks that candle fire is enough to cook.
Correect errors in verb forms.
削除He stares at a candol a hundred meters away, and stays out all night long.
返信削除The next morning, when his friends hears that, they think he use the candol to warm himself, and invite him to the dinner party.
They wait the meal for some hours, but he doesn’t make and bring the food, so they see him.
He is burning the pot with a candol a meter away.
They say the dinner can’t be cooked with the candol.
Then he says, if he could warm himself with the candol a hundred meter away, the pot can be heated with the candol a meter away.
#2=> Write in two sentences.
削除It was freezing outside so Hodja feel very cold.
返信削除But he found a candle light in a window about a hundred meter away.
He imagined that the light helped keeping him warm.
He could stay allnight outside but his friends said Hodja use the candle to make him warm.
Hodja invited friends to dinner but there were no dish.
Friends found that Hodja hanged large cooking pot on a single candle.
Hdja said if a cadle that a hundred meter away can make him warm allnight, a candle that only one meter away can heat a pot for dinner.
Correect errors in verb forms.
削除He can stay the night without any special item but he imagine that the warmth of a candle.
返信削除His friends surprise at him but they point out that he uses the candle as special items.
He can't convince them so he has to invite his friends for dinner.
At the dinner, to use the candle for cooking makes his friends convince that he can't do anything just one candle.
#2 Correct the errors in verb usage and tense.
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削除His friends are surprised at him staying out all night long in the cold weather but they point out that he used the candles as special items.
削除he saw a candole which was about a hundred meters away and felt warm.
返信削除Finaly, he was able to stay outside all night.
His friend didn't convice that he could do.
He had to make dinner for them .
He tryed to make it by a candole,but he could not.
His friends notice that he can't get warm by a candole .
#3: Rewrite
削除His friends clamed that he used a candole to keep him warm .
削除He regrets agreeing to the bargain because it was freezing.
返信削除But he finds a candle a hundred meters away and he is able to stay out all night.
The next morning, he claims that he didn't use anthing to warm himself and just saw a candle.
But he didn't convince them and he invited to dinner.
He cooks dinner with candle because he thinks it can warm pot, too.
Add another sentence to explain what he did.
削除While he is staying out, he finds a candle a hundred meters away and imagines it helps warm him.
返信削除By doing so, he can stay out all night without anything to warm him.
When he tells about the candle to his friends, they say he uses it to warm himself.
So he starts make dinner, but it takes so long time.
His friends are into kitchen and see he cook by a candle.
He says a candle that is a meter away can heat pot if a candle a hundred away can make me warm.
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3.When he tells about the candle to his friends, they say he used it to warm himself.
削除4.He protests that he didn't use it, but they don't believe and he has to invent them to dinner.
When he gave up staying outside, he found a candle in a window about a hundred meters away.
返信削除Imagining the candles lights halped him kept warming.
Next morning, his friend was suprised that he seemed to fine.
His friend heard about the candle so his friend didn't convice and made him cook diner.
The meal wasn't served on time becase he cook it by a candle.
Finaly, he showed his friend that a candle which was a hundred meters away couldn't keep him warm all night long.
#1: Rewrite
削除It was freezing outside but he found a candle in a window about a hundred meters away.
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