2024年8月3日土曜日

Writing-Aug 3

If you work for the same company for seven years, you’ll have 20 paid vacation days a year. 
How many of the paid vacation days will you use? Why, for what, or to do what?
=> Speak your response in three sentences. 
=> Write your response in five to six sentences.
FYI: there are 16 public holidays in Japan.
travel abroad, feel bad about leaving work, be afraid of falling behind work

TS: I’ll use all of my vacation days by the end of the year.
SS-1: I’ll use 15 vacation days for traveling. I love traveling. It refreshes me both physically and mentally. I can work harder and better if I’m refreshed.
SS-2: I’ll keep the remaining five vacation days in case of medical emergencies. I never know when I get sick or injured.
SS-3: If I still have unused vacation days, I’ll take day-offs before the end of the year.
(76 words in 7 sentences.)

13 件のコメント:

  1. I’ll use 20 paid vacation days a year.
    Vacations support me to improve quality of work and health.
    It’s difficult for me to work without stress.
    I can’t keep working if I won’t have any funny things.
    I can become positive to think how to use my vacation days.
    I’ll use my vacation days to trip, rest, and meet my friends and family.

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    1. Very well explained. 63 words.
      #1 all of the 20 ...
      #2 help me ...
      #3 without stress=> when I'm stressed
      #4 won't<=? funny things=> if I don't have any fun.
      #5 What does this sentence explain or support???
      #6 to travel, ...

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  2. I'll use more than eighteen paid vacation days in a year.
    I want to travel somewhere twice in a year, so I'll use fourteen paid vacation days for the travel.
    Also, I want to stay my parents' house for a long time in New year, so I'll use four paid vacation days in New year,
    I want to keep two days for my health. I think If I get a cold, and use all of my paid vacation, I'll work.
    I don't want to lose my money, because I need a lot of money for my hobby and for the future.
    If I don't get a cold, I'll sell it.

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    1. 110 words. Well explained.
      #1 at least 18 vacation days.
      #2 twice a year.
      #3 stay at, parents’ house?
      => I will use four … to stay … the New Year
      #4, 5=> I’ll keep two vacation days in case I cannot work for medical needs.
      #6 unnecessary.
      #7 => If I don’t use my paid vacation days, I want my employer to buy it.

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    2. I'll use at least 18 vacation days in a year.
      I want to travel somewhere twice a year, so I'll use fourteen paid vacation days for the travel.
      Also, I will use four vacation days to stay at my parents' house during the New Year.
      I'll keep two vacation days in case I cannot work for medical needs. I think If I get a cold, and use all of my paid vacation, I'll work.
      If I don't use my paid vacation days, I want my employer to buy it.

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  3. Shizuka
    I will use 20 paid vacation days.
    I sometimes feel very sick and I have headaches.
    So I have to go to the hospital many times.
    Also, I don’t have strength enough to work all day.
    If I work too hard, I must withstand severe headache.
    I would rather get many money than take a lot of vacation.

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    1. 58 words. Well explained.
      #1 => I won’t use my paid vacation days for fun but I’ll keep them for medical emergencies.
      #2, 3=> I have to … because … a severe headache
      #4 => have the strength to …
      #5 => …, I might get a headache.
      #6 many money=> than enjoying vacation days

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  4. Tamaki
    I’ll use all of them.
    I think It’s good leaving work sometimes because it’s refreshed me.
    I don’t think I can work every day constantly.
    Also, I’ll surely got sick, and I’ll be absent from work few days every year.
    Health is more important than working.

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    1. 46 words. Write a TS!
      #1 Write your response to the question.
      #3 => Since I might get sick from time to time, I …
      #4 => If …, I won’t …

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  5. Shuntaro
    I will use all of my vacation days.
    I will use 10 vacation days for traveling with my family and friends. Spending time with them is important for me to refresh.
    Also, I will get sick because of stress or fatigue.
    I should relax without my work for my health.

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    1. #3 ... helps me refresh myself.
      #4 will=> may
      #5 => I will need time to recover from illness.

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  6. I’ll use all of my vacation days by the end of the year.
    I’ll use 14 vacation days for traveling somewhere.
    Traveling makes me relax and excited and has a good effects on my health.
    I’ll use 6 vacation days for staying at home.
    I usually have a tiredness if I go to some distance places.
    So I need a rest time.

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    1. #3 relaxed
      #5=> get tired from going out ...
      #6 a time to rest.

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