What do you think children should/shouldn't do?
Write your response in three sentences. Make sure to clearly justify your opinion.
#1 I think children should play outside more (instead of playing games in the house).
#2 If they stay home too long, they’ll become physically weak.
#3 Also, they can learn what others do and what is happening outside of their houses.
I think children shouldn’t spend much time to use a smartphone.
返信削除If they use it a long time, they’ll lose their eyesight.
Also, smartphones cause to the internet trouble especially younger people.
#1 so much time
削除#2 for a long time,
lose-> impair
#3 may cause troubles especially to ...
I think children shouldn't drink juice every day.
返信削除If they drink it frequently, their teeth become to melt.
Also, drinking juice is bad for their health so they cannot live for a long time.
juice=> sugary drinks/sodas
削除too often, ... will make their teeth decay
Why is it bad for health?
I think children should use computers.
返信削除If they can type so fast, they can do many kinds of things so fast, but many university students can't type computer keyboard now
Also, they can get many kinds of skills, such as programming, and movie editing, if they are interested in them.
#1 ... more.
削除#2 so fast=> faster
, but ...<= unnecessary
#3 get=> develop
in them=> computers
Tamaki
返信削除I think children should read books more.
It’s important to improve their reading skills since they young because they will face a lot of scenes that require it.
Also, they can learn many words that they didn’t know by reading books, and they’ll definitely get better to explaining something.
#1 read more books
削除#2 ??? Write simply
#3 => Also, as they read books, they'll increase vocabulary to help them ...
Shuntaro
返信削除I think children should not use a smartphone.
They would get bad eyesight and have bad posture if they use a smartphone for a long time.
Also, they don’t play outside, so they can’t improve their physical abilities,
#2 => If they ..., they'll ...
削除#3 => If they ... instead, they'll become physically healthier.
I think children should play sports more.
返信削除As they get older, they can’t have time to do exercise because will be busy for studying.
Also, playing sports have good effects on their health.
#3=> #2 If they ..., they'll ...
削除#2=> #3 Also, when they become older, they won't ...
#1 many people=> when they ...
返信削除#2 => When they ..., it'll help ...
#3 their lives more
Shizuka
返信削除I think children should take in calcium. The bone only grow in childhood. It is important to make strong bones for the future.
Akinari
返信削除I think children should exercise more.
Recently, most of the children are playing game in their free time.
So, they should exercise for their both mental health and physical health.