Nature is critical
to our survival: it provides us with our oxygen, regulates our weather
patterns, produces our food, feed, and fiber. But human activity has altered
almost 75 percent of the earth’s surface, squeezing wildlife and nature into
an ever-smaller corner of the planet.
The health of ecosystems on which we
and all other species depend is deteriorating
more rapidly than ever, affecting our economies, livelihoods, food security,
health, and quality of life worldwide.
Deforestation
and desertification – caused by human
activities and climate change – pose major
challenges to sustainable development and have affected the lives and
livelihoods of millions of people.
- Forests are home
to around 1.6 billion people and over 80% of all land species of animals,
plants, and insects.
- As for biodiversity,
of the 8,300 animal breeds, 8% are extinct
and 22% are at risk of extinction.
Goal 15.3: By 2030, combat
desertification, restore degraded land and
soil, including land affected by desertification, drought, and floods, and
strive to achieve a land degradation-neutral world
Goal 15.5: Take urgent
action to reduce the degradation of natural habitats, stop the loss of
biodiversity.
Goal 15.C: Enhance global
support for efforts to combat poaching and trafficking of protected species,
=> Write about Goal 15 in three sentences in 15 min.
Tips Choose 1 sen from each section and modify it.
Put (v) after each verb and (adj) after each
adjective
=> STT Read aloud
Although nature provides our basic necessities like
oxygen and food, human activities have created substantial impacts on the
planet’s ecosystem, such as deforestation and desertification.
8% of the
animals are already extinct and over 20% are threatened of extinction.
Urgent
actions need to be taken to stop desertification and deforestation, restore
degraded land and soil, and protect vulnerable species from poaching.
Nature play(v) an important(adj) role sustaining our life.
返信削除We need(v) to protect(v) animal breeds because 8% are(v) extinct and 22%(v) are at risk of extinction .
If biodiversity is lost(v), our lives are(v) threatened(adj), which means(v) that we must protect(v) the richness of the land in order to continue(v) living.
#1 play->
削除role in/to ...
#2 8% of them ...
#3 , which means=> so ..
Nature plays an important role sustaining our life.
削除We need to protect animal breeds because 8% are extinct and 22% are at the list of extinction.
If bio diversity is lost our lives are certain which means that we must protect the lateness of the island in order to continue living
We continue to destroy (v) the Earth and 75% of it was changed (v) because of us.
返信削除So many (adj) people and animals live (v) in forest but we destroy (v) forest so, many kinds of animals are extinct.
We should restore (v) degraded land and soil to save (v) many animals.
#1 the earth's environment
削除#2 => Many ... but ... and ...
#3 save all living species.
We continues to destroy the earths environment and the 70% of it was changed because of us.
削除Many people and animals live in Forest but we destroy it and many kinds of animals are extinct.
Please share the restore degraded land and soil to save a relieving species.
The health of ecosystems on which we and all other(adj) spices depend(v) is(v) getting worse and worse by human(adj) activity.
返信削除Deforestation and desertification lose(v) many(adj) spices lives and affect(v) people’s livelihoods.
Recovering degraded land and soil and exposing poaching are(v) measure that save(v) earth.
#1 ... of the land ...
削除#2 lose-> killed/made ... extinct
#3 ... are some of the measures that could ...
Nature is (v)critical to our survival it provides us with our oxygen, regulates our weather patterns, produces our food, feed, and fiber.
返信削除We and all other species depend (v)is deteriorating more rapidly than ever, affecting our economies, livelihoods, food security, health, and quality of life worldwide.
#1 ... because it provides...
削除#2 ... depend on the land but it is ...
You need to set the subject and the key verb.