Write an opinion paragraph about
technology in education.
Topic 2: Do you think high schools should use more teaching and learning technologies?
Topic 2: Do you think high schools should use more teaching and learning technologies?
Try
using signal words to introduce SSs or SDs: First, Also, For example
SD: For example, they use smartphones all the time for everything but they don’t know how they work so much.
SS-2: Also, technologies are essential for future jobs and career development.
SD: Technologies greatly change the ways we do things.
SD: These days, call centers use AI to provide information that supports their customers
CS: It is helpful for high school students to learn about technology for their lives and future.
SD: For example, they use smartphones all the time for everything but they don’t know how they work so much.
SS-2: Also, technologies are essential for future jobs and career development.
SD: Technologies greatly change the ways we do things.
SD: These days, call centers use AI to provide information that supports their customers
CS: It is helpful for high school students to learn about technology for their lives and future.
In my opinion, schools should use new technologies to provide satisfying education to students.
返信削除New tablet terminal such as iPad contribute teaching classes efficiently.
Teachers don’t have to grade student’s test if they use web test.
Schools can save paper by giving a task to students on web.
Teachers and students can share informations, videos and pictures even they don’t stay at school.
Students can know the content of class and information any time.
Schools can choose to hold a online class when teachers and students can’t gather at school.
The sentences look good, except for U/UC and singular/plural errors.
削除terminal->, test->, informations=>, a online,
Which sentences are SSs and SDs? Use signal words to clarify the roles of each sentence; First, Also, For example
In my opinion, schools should use new technologies to provide satisfying education to students.
削除First, new tablets such as iPad contribute teaching classes efficiently and good environment.
Teachers don’t have to grade student’s exams if they use web test.
Schools can save paper by giving a task to student on web.
Second, if schools use apps such as “Teams”, teachers and students can share informations, videos and pictures even they don’t stay at school.
Students can know not only information, but also the content of class any time.
Schools can choose to hold a online when teachers and students can’t gather at school.
In my opinion, high school should use more teaching and learning technologies.
返信削除New systems of education reduce paper.
There are a lot of futility paper in school.
Handouts is not always necessary to print out, just enough the online data.
The new system improve efficiency of teachers and students.
It is not necessary to teach same thing for each class.
It should change to video class.
New education technologies makes us more convenient.
Use signal words to clarify the roles of each sentence; First, Also, For example
削除#2 New systems=> New technologies ...
#4 to print out, just enough the online data.<= ???
#5 system improve=>
efficiency of teachers and students<=???
#6 It is not ... <= What does this sentence support or explain?
#7 It should change ...<= What does "it" mean?
#8 makes us more convenient=> makes our ...
In my opinion, high school students should learn about technology for living in the future.
返信削除People will lose many jobs by evolutions of technologies. AI is one of the technologies and it able be recognize the products or people.
AI can make our lives better. Translation system is controlled by AI, so it is not necessary to learn languages. People can easily to communicate with foreigners come from everywhere.
Which sentences are SSs and SDs?
削除Use signal words to clarify the roles of each sentence; First, Also, For example
#1 for living=> to ...
#3 it able be=>
#6 foreigners come from everywhere=> foreigners who ...
In my opinion, high school students should learn about technology to live in the future.
削除People will lose many jobs by evolutions of technologies. AI is one of the technologies and it able be recognize the products or people.
AI can make our lives better. Translation system is controlled by AI, so it is not necessary to learn languages. People can easily to communicate with foreigners who comes from other countries.
In my opinion, high school students should learn about technology.
返信削除Technology is used in a variety of everyday situations.
Having technology helps to use tools well and to get a job.
You need to write two SSs and supporting details.
削除#2 in a variety of everyday situations
=> in a variety of situations.
#3 to use tools<= who?
to get a job<= who?