Write your response in 5-6 sentences, including the keyword(s) of the advertisement concept.
I think the way Doritos created buzz by having customers participate and be involved in their ad is the most successful way to promote the product. Those who created their TV ads are keen to win the competition. They try hard to come up with creative ways from customers’ viewpoints.
Also, the viewers of those ads are likely to feel they are part of the Doritos brand. As they see more ads and their opinions are reflected in the competition, they will naturally buy more Doritos snack food.
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Clarify the supporting points and then explain them.
Use examples. Use “they/it” carefully. Verb patterns!
Tamaki
返信削除I think the way Kit Kat created buzz by connecting products in people’s minds with something that they see often is the most successful way to promote the product. If the product can connect with things that people see often, it always reminds of the product when they see things that connect with product. People might buy their product because of the things that they often see. Also, buying their product becomes natural by connecting with everyday things. If it happens, the profit will be stable.
86 words Explain more specifically. Any example?
削除#2 reminds who? What do you want to say???
#3=> because … (explain) #4 What are everyday things?
#5 “it”<= what??? Why the profit will be stable???
Shizuka
返信削除I think the way Red Bull created buzz by doing something very unusual is the most successful way to promote the product. It is very effective way to get people’s attention. They like to watch interesting things and the more interesting things are easy to remember. Also, there are many kinds of energy drinks, so the company must separate from other ones. People don’t understand that the detailed differences of them, so it is so important to be known the name.
81 words. Why is “buzz” important???
削除#2 a? #3 the more interesting things are easy to remember=> the …, the … #4 separate from other ones=> make their drinks look/appeal …
#5 Why? How?
I think advertising that uses emotional appeal is the most effective.
返信削除This type of advertisement can give a strong impression of the brand.
In particular, content that includes joy and empathy helps increase the desire to buy.
Also, it is possible to aim for the spread using social media.
By moving to emotions, it can lead to brand recognition.
59 words. Which one in the text is that??? Explain more specifically. #2 to whom??? #3 What kind? Example?
削除#4 Who wants to do that? “aim for the spread”=> to spread (what?)
#5 moving to emotions<=???
Maruoka
返信削除I think the way Red Bull created buzz by conducting unusual events. We are likely to remain memories of surprising things. If we go to a supermarket, we wants to buy products. Also, if they watch unusual events, they want to talk with their friends. Then the product become famous and the company sell it more. Therefore companies pay for unusual events is the most effective.
66 words. Pay attention to the sentence structures and grammar!
削除#1 => … is … #2 remain memories=>
#3 we wants=> What kind??? #4 “they”??? talk what???
#5 product become=> company sell=>
#6 company … effective<=???
I think the way Red Bull created buzz by conducting unusual events is the most effective. We are likely to remember of surprising things. If we go to a supermarket, we want to buy such products. Also, if we watch unusual events, we want to talk about it with our friends.Then the products will become famous and the company will sell it more. Therefore, Red Bullcompany's advertising is the most effective.
削除I think the way Doritos made their customers to make their own TV ads. People will get interested in a competition from company. Making TV ads is unusual experience for many people, and viewers can enjoy watching them and choose the best one. Also, candidates of TV ads are customers, and viewer can think of Doritos’s products from the same view points. People make ads have to buy them to find their attractive points, and viewer want to buy to watch ads.
返信削除82 words. Explain who does what more clearly.
削除#1 … is what????? #2 a competition from company<=???
#3 Making … for people, <=????? choose the best ones<=???
#4 candidates<=??? viewer=> same viewpoints of who/what???
#5 People make ads<=????? to watch ads<=?????
Shuntaro
返信削除I think the way Red Bull created buzz by doing something very unusual is the most successful way to promote the product. People are influenced by the surprising news. The Red Bull brand has features that cannot be found anywhere because of the unusual event, so it leaves an impression. Also, people would want to talk about the news. If customers talk more, they get to know more products of Red Bull.
72 words. The supporting points are clear.
削除#2 the surprising news=> #3 an impression on whom???
#4 what kind of news?
#5 talk more about what? they get …=> they’ll …
I think the way Red Bull created buzz by doing something very unusual is the most successful way to promote the product. People are influenced by the surprising news. The Red Bull brand has features that cannot be found anywhere because of the unusual event, so it leaves an impression on people who saw the news. Also, people would want to talk about unusual events. If customers talk about them with others, they will get to know more products of Red Bull.
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