2017年9月21日木曜日

Review Junior-3L September 21

Write in English.
アミールはステージでよい演技をし、嬉しくなりました。不運なことに、アミールのお父さんの友人の一人が彼の演技を見て彼の写真を彼のお父さんに送りました。アミールが帰ると、彼の両親は二度としないようにと命じました。彼らはコメディショーを続けることを許さないでしょう。

9 件のコメント:

  1. Amiler preformed well on the stage and he felt happy.
    Unfortunately one of Amiler's father's friend saw his performance and sent photo to Amiler's father.
    When Amiler back, his parents told him not to do it again.
    They wouldn't let him carry on with his comedy shows.

    返信削除
  2. Ammir porformed well on the stage and he felt happy.
    Unfortunantry, one of the Ammir's father's friends saw him and sent photo to his father.
    When he came back his parents told him not to do it again.
    They wouldn't let him carry on his comedy shows.

    返信削除
  3. Amiir performed well on the stage and he felt happy.
    Unfortunately, one of Amiir’s father’s friends saw his performance and sent his photo to his father.
    When Amiir came home, his parents told him not to do it again.
    They wouldn’t let he carry on with his comedy shows.

    返信削除
  4. Amiir pefomeed well on the stage. one of them Amiir's fathers friends saw his pefomance and he sent his ather his picture.Amiir was back,his parents told him again do it.

    返信削除
  5. Amiir did a great paformanse on the stage, and he was happy.
    Unfortunatly, one of Amiir's father's friends saw his parformanse and send a photo to his father.When Amiir went back,his parents told him not to do that again.They wouldn't allow him to do comedy.

    返信削除
  6. Amiir performed well on the stage and he felt happy.
    Unfortunaly, Amiir's father's friends saw his peformance and sent his photo to his father.
    When Amiir was back, his parents told him not to do it again.
    They wouldn't let him carry on with his comedy show.

    返信削除
  7. Amiil performed well and he felt happy.
    Unfortunately,one of Amiil's father's friends saw his performance and sent photo to his father.
    When Amiil bock,his father told him not to do it again.
    They wouldn't let him to his comedy show.

    返信削除
  8. Amiir perfermed well on the stage and he was happy.
    But unfortunatly, one of amiir's father's friends saw his performance and sent his photo to his father.
    When Amiir go back home, his parents told him not to doit again.
    they wouldn't let he comedy.

    返信削除
  9. Amiir performed well om the stage and felt happy. Unfortunatery, one of Amiir's father's friends saw his performance and sent his photo to his father. When Amiir was back, hsi father told him not to do it again.

    返信削除