Write examples to support the main idea and complete the paragraph.
TS Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
CS If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be politer/more polite.
TS Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
For example, some people make or take calls in a quiet public place and talk loudly. It is quite annoying to hear someone talking loudly in a place where silence or only quiet conversations are taking place. Such people don’t seem to care about the others around them.
There are also people who call from a noisy place. They tend to talk too loudly because they can’t hear well. It is inconsiderate to the person who has to bear with the noises and loud voice of the caller. Convenience for one person may be an annoyance for another.
Cell phone users tend to be inconsiderate to others than they usually are when they are on the phone.
CS If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.
Many people do not have good cell phones manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For example, some people are walking with they looking at their cell phones.Because of their cell phones, they can’t be aware of people on a road. It has a danger of attacking someone.
Also, some people are using their cell phones at the priority seats on the train. In Japan, there is the rule that we can’t use our cell phones at or near the priority seats on the train. Such people don’t care of people with some electoral medical machines.
Cell phone users must be more carefully when they use their cell phones.
If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.
Good examples.
削除#2 ... while they are looking at ...
#3,4=> They may bump into something or be hit by ...
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For example, they often use their cell phones while they are walking and hit against people.
They concentrate on their phones so much that they don’t notice that and apologize.
Also, people who sit on the train or buses usually use their cell phones without caring anything around them.
So, they never give up their seats even if an old person is standing in front of them.
If cell phone users were more thoughtful to others, they might be more polite.
Good examples.
削除#2 They may bump into sth/sb, knock themselves against sth/sb.
#4 => are sitting
#5 never?
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For example, some people use cell phones and look down while walking crowded street. It is dangereous because they often hit others easily. If they wants to check their cell phones, they should stop at side of the street.
And also there are some people who talk with thier cell phones at public place such as on the train. It is very annoying to others. They often make loudly noise without thinking of others at the place.
Cell phone users also tend to watch their phones when they meet and talk with their friends.
If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.
Good examples.
削除#3 bump into sth/sb, knock themselves against sth/sb.
#5, 6=> They often ..., and annoy others.
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For example, a lot of people listen music with their phone with large sounds. It makes people unpleasant.
And also some people use their phones in train even if it is very crowded. It use spaces and it allow few people to ride them.
All these phone users is very annoying. I don’t want to be such a embarrassing person.
削除#2 ... loudly.
#3 => It annoys/bothers people around them.
#4 ... on a crowded train.
#5 ???
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For example, some people make or take call while they are walking.
They concentrate on the phone, sometimes, they crashed others or bike.
It's too dangerous for each person. They think only themselves but others.
There are also people who call midnight.
It is impolite because people are relaxed and sleep at night.
They should think what time it is and then call.
If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.
Good examples.
削除#3 bump into sth/sb, knock themselves against sth/sb.
#4,5 => Such people only ... and don't pay attention to others.
#6 => Also, ... <= but where???
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For examples, some listen to music with eraphone at a loud volume on the train.
It is very annoying for other people on the train.
Also others walk while watching their phones.
They might hit other people around them and it is dangersous for both themselves and others.
When we use phones, we have to keep good manners.
#2 ... loudly
削除#3 ... for people around them.
#4 where?
bump into sth/sb, knock themselves against sth/sb.
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For example, some people use their phone in the dark place like movie theater.
It is very annoying to watch light from the phone while watching movie.
There also people who use their phone at the museam even though it's not allowed.
Phone users should follow the rules.
They tend to be impolite at the public place.
If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.
Good examples. a dark place, a movie
削除#3 watch=> see
#5,6=> These are you opinions. Try to explain the example.
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phone.
返信削除For example, some people listen to their music too loud and sometimes they make sounds leakage. That's really annoying. They only have to turn down the volume a little bit.
Another example, especially young people can't stop using their phone even when the train is too crowded. Like playing video games or chatting and so on. They always in someone's way and sometimes make people angry.
If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.
#2, 3=> ... so loudly and annoy ...
削除#4 => They should enjoy/shouldn't ...
#5,6=> ... even on a crowded train by playing ...
Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除Fr example, people always watchs smartphone's screen while they are walking and hit another person.
They can't be care of another person because of the smartphone’s screen.
Also people usually talk aloud with smartphone in pubulic space.
They don't realize themself to make another person irritate.
Users draw some accident because of the less attension.
If cell phone users were thoughtful of others ,they might be more polite.
#2 ... some people ... and bump into sth/sb, knock themselves against sth/sb.
削除#3 They pay no or little attention to ...
#5,6 => Explain more specifically.
Many people do not have good manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
返信削除For example, some people don't turn off their phone when they watch movies.
Sounds or vibrations of the phone disturb others' enjoyment.
Also people who use their phones when someone speak to them are very impolite.
It makes others to think they feel boring.
If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.
#2 ... in a movie theater.
削除#3 ... disturb others around them.
#4 ... while someone is speaking to them.
#5 It is impolite because ...