SDG 16: Promote just,
peaceful, and *inclusive societies
Conflict,
insecurity, weak institutions, and limited access to
justice remain a great threat to sustainable development. And the births
of one in four children under age 5 worldwide are never officially recorded,
depriving them of proof of legal identity for their rights and access to
justice and social services.
- The number of people fleeing war, persecution, and conflict exceeded 70 million in 2018, the highest in 70 years.
- Violence against children affects more than 1 billion children around the world.
- 50% of the world’s children experience violence every year, and a child is killed by violence somewhere every 7 minutes.
Goal 16.1: Significantly reduce all forms of violence and related death rates everywhere
- The number of people fleeing war, persecution, and conflict exceeded 70 million in 2018, the highest in 70 years.
- Violence against children affects more than 1 billion children around the world.
- 50% of the world’s children experience violence every year, and a child is killed by violence somewhere every 7 minutes.
Goal 16.1: Significantly reduce all forms of violence and related death rates everywhere
Put (v)
after each verb and (adj) after each adjective
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In order to realize peaceful and inclusive societies,
wars, conflicts, and violence all need to be reduced around the world.
Abuse
and violence to more than 1 billion children around the world need to be
stopped.
It is essential to promote the rule of law and give everyone access to
justice.
There are（v） not enough(adj) social(adj) structures in around the world so many people live(v) in dangerous(adj) and inconvenient(adj) society.
返信削除End(v) all crime that torment(v) children.
We need(v) to protect(v) all people from all death rates everywhere using justice.
They are not enough social structures around the world so many people live in dangerous and inconvenient society.
削除End all climb that Tremont children.
We needed to protect all the people from all the death rates everywhere using justice.
#3 reduce death rates
削除Half of children experience (v) violence and some of them are killed (v) by it.
返信削除We should finish (v) exploitation, trafficking and all kind of violences to everyone can live（v） with peace of mind
2018 was the worst (adj) year of fleeing war and persecution.
Half of children experience violence and some of them are killed by it.
削除We should finish exploitation trafficking and all kind of violences to everyone can live with peace of mind
2018 was the worst year of fleeing war and persecution.
#1 ... are killed.
削除#2 for everyone to ...
Violence against children affects more the 1 billion children in the world.
返信削除And half of the children experience violence and some of them were killed.
We should make peaceful world and make more safety social.
#3 make safer society
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