2024年10月26日土曜日

Retell-Oct 26

Read Par.1-5
=> Write to retell the incident in two sentences in the present tense.
P1-3: After a rich couple leaves home to see a play, a burglar enters their house and opens a hidden safe. 
P4-5: When he hears voices downstairs, he quickly steals jewelry from the safe and runs off.


18 件のコメント:

  1. The tall man enter the Eduard and Susan house while they go to the theater.
    However, Susan return home and call a police detective so he ran off from the house.

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    1. enter->
      while they go=> after they left for
      return->
      call->
      ran->

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  2. Eduardo and his wife are very surprised that someone enters their house when they go out.
    A tall man is stuffing her jewelry into a bag and escape from there house before they into the room.

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    1. enterers-> entered
      when they go out-> while they were out
      is stuffing=> stuffs
      escape->
      they into=>

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  3. In the evening, Eduard and Susan go to a theater, but they notice that they forget the tickets as soon as they arrive.
    When they arrives at home, she find someone steal their jewelry.

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    1. In the evening=> On one evening,
      they arrives=>
      she find=>
      steal->

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  4. Arellano and wife Susan went to the theater, after they set the security alarm, and locked the front door, but the tall man who knows about Susan and Arellano remove the key from Susan and get many expensive things from the safe.
    Arellano and Susan call to the police when they back to the house, but the tall man success to escape.

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    1. and wife-> and his wife
      went->
      remove the key from Susan<=???
      get=> steals
      call to=> call
      success to=>

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  5. Susan and Eduard goes home because she forgot her theater play tickets.
    Tall man quickly stuff the jewelry and runs off.

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  6. Tamaki
    A man gets in to a house that Edward and Susan lives and takes a lot of accessories from safe while they leave the house to go to the movies.
    However, Edward and Susan returns home and they call police, so the man runs away from the house.

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    1. while they leave=> while they are out
      Edward and Susan returns->

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  7. Shizuka
    When Eduard Arellano and Susan back to the house to take tickets, they find there is thief, so Susan calls the police. The thief goes to their mansion to get jewelry, but he hears their voice, he escapes.

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    1. back to=> (verb)
      but he hears=> but when ..., he ...

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  8. A tall man uses a key to unlock the front door after Eduard Arellano and his wife leave home.
    He hears voice downstairs, so he quickly steals the jewelry into the red bag and run off.

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    1. front door=> of the house where/that ...
      He hears=> When he ..., he ...

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  9. When Eduardo and his wife leave home, a tall man uses a key to unlock the door.
    They call to a police, but a tall man runs away from the house.

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