Write a paragraph about good ways for families
or students to relax.
Include a topic sentence, two or three supporting sentences,
and a concluding sentence.
Also, write at least one supporting detail (explanation/example) to one of the supporting sentences.
Also, write at least one supporting detail (explanation/example) to one of the supporting sentences.
☆ Be consistent with the subject-object: we/you/I
TS: Being with friends is
a great way for students to relax.
SS-1: First of all, it is easy to be with friends because they know you well.
<=SD You always have something to talk about.
SS-2: Also, with friends, you can laugh and have fun.
<=SD Laughter is a good way to reduce stress.
SS-3: Finally, you can talk with friends about things other than school.
<=SD Because school is a big part of our lives, students need a break from that topic.
CS: Spending time with friends helps students relax.
SS-1: First of all, it is easy to be with friends because they know you well.
<=SD You always have something to talk about.
SS-2: Also, with friends, you can laugh and have fun.
<=SD Laughter is a good way to reduce stress.
SS-3: Finally, you can talk with friends about things other than school.
<=SD Because school is a big part of our lives, students need a break from that topic.
CS: Spending time with friends helps students relax.
Punctuation errors: First,
have/share a good time together,
make/build good memory,
share an experience