2018年1月20日土曜日

Writing Skill-Sr.2-Jan.20

Writing Skill: Supporting your main idea with examples.
Write examples to support the main idea and complete the paragraph.

TS   Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.

For example, some people make or take calls in a quite public place and talk loudly. It is quite annoying to hear someone talking loudly in a place where silence or only quiet conversations are taking place. Such people don’t seem to care about the others around them.

There are also people who call from a noisy place. They tend to talk too loudly because they can’t hear well. It is inconsiderate to the person who has to bear with the noises and loud voice of the caller. Convenience for one person may be annoyance for another.

Cell phone users tend to be inconsiderate to others than they usually are when they are on the phone.

CS  If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be politer/more polite.

18 件のコメント:

  1. Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
    For instance,using cell phone when they are walking is dangerous.It might injure not only bymyself but also others.Light impact could hurt elderly person.
    Also,sound from cell phone interrupt others.It can be say in many situations.It will be a big problem when the cell phone ring during business talk.It might effects on own career.
    Cell phone usually helps us, but it could cause problems.

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    1. 3. It could cause an accident and hurt themselves or even others.
      4. Unnecessary.
      6. Unnecessary.
      7. It could cause ...

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  2. Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
    For example, some people use cell phones while they are walking.
    It is so dangerous to look down when walking that it might cause accidddent.
    Another example is using cell phone at the place where people are prohibited using it.
    There are some people who talk on the phone in the hospital.
    It is trouble of other patients and doctors.
    People should think about whether they can use their cell phone here or not when they use it.

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    1. 3. ... because it could cause an accident.
      4. ... at a place where it is prohibited/not allowed, such as ...
      6. It is troublesome/annoying to ...

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  3. For example,people who use their mobile phones while they are walking.It is dangerous because they don't care about infront of them.They may cause accidents .
    There are also people who call in a public place such as train or library. This behaveir is anoying to other people .people should concider where they call.
    Cell phone users tend to take photos even if the place which is prohibited to be taken.They have to think before taking.

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    1. 2. ... they don't pay attention to what in front of them.
      3. This could cause an accident.
      6. Unnecessary.

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  4. Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
    For example, some people use cell phones while walking. It's very dangerous if some one walk in front of they when they are looking down.
    There are also people who keep using their cell on the train. They can't gave their seat on the train because they don't notice old person or baby. These people can't look and care around.
    Cell phone users should be careful of the around.
    If cell phone users were more thoughtful of others, they might be more polite.

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    1. 3. ... walks in front of them ...
      5. They don't notice if there is an elderly person or a mother holding a baby in front of them, who should be given a seat.
      6,7 Unnecessary

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  5. Many People don’t have good cell phone manners, and they talk impolite when they use their phones.
    For example, some people don’t see around them when they use phones.
    They sometimes hit people each other because they see only their phones.
    Such people are sometimes busy when they get the train off because they don’t notice that the train arrives the station they want to get.
    There are also people who can’t talk well on the phone.
    They fell that it is dull to call, that’s why they don’t have enough experiences to talk well.
    It is polite to be sincere but they can’t talk so especially when they apporogize.
    If cell phone users were more regular, they might be politer.

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    1. 3. ... bump into others.
      4. Unnecessary.
      6,7. They tend to talk on the phone without care for others, and lose appropriate manner.

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  6. Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
    For example, some people who listen to music loudly with earphone in a quite public space. It makes people who is arround them annoyed. However, the listeners don’t notice that is annoying.
    There are also people who walk with watching their phones.They watch only the phones and don’t pay attention to the people arround them. They may knock other people.
    We should consider other people and behave politely when we use phones.

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    1. 2. ... some people listen to music loudly on their mobile phone...
      4. ... that it annoys others.
      5. ... walk while staring at their phones.
      6, 7. They don't ... and could ...

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  7. Many people do not have good cell phones manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
    For example, at the street, people look down and use their phones when they walking. They oftten hit by others because many people do that. It is a dangerous and impolite thing especially taking their phone when walking with someone.
    And also there are people who talk loudly with their phone at public place. There are quiet place and many people around, so loudly voice is quite noisy.
    If you use cell phones, be carefully to the around and you will get more good manners.

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    1. 2. ... some people ... on the street.
      3. ... hit others who are also ...
      4. ... especially when they ...
      6. It is quite noisy and annoying for others.

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  8. Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and they are impolite when they use their phones.
    For example, we can see many people walk with using or watching their phones at various places recently.
    It can cause dangerous accident such as minor collision between the person and a bike or fall down.
    Also, some people don’t notice a person who are elderly and pregnant woman because of the eyes looked down in the train and bus. It’ll be a trouble for them. It’s important to attention for others.
    Paying attention when using phone.

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    1. 2. ... people walking while using their mobile phones in busy streets/places.
      3. They could hit others walking or on a bike.
      4. They don't notice if there is an elderly person or a mother holding a baby in front of them, who should be given a seat.

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  9. Many people do not have good cell phone manners, and implite when they use their phones.
    For example, some people use cell phone duling driving. It is quite dangerous to walkers. If drivers taken their eyes off their cell phone, it would cause some accidents.

    And also, some people use cell phone duling walking. It's also dangerous to drivers and of course walkers.If walkers use cell phone and happen a accident, the responsibility would rests with drivers.

    Cell phone users don't use it duling something.

    If cell phone users paid attention to people, accidents might decreasing.

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    1. 2. ... while driving a car.
      3, 4. It is quite dangerous to others on the street and it could cause an accident.
      5. ... while walking.
      7. It is also problematic/troublesome to drivers because they sometimes make a sudden, unexpected move.
      8. Unnecessary.

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