2018年1月24日水曜日

Writing-Sr.2-Jan.24

Write a paragraph in response to a question posted on an online forum about politeness;
I think that young students today are very rude. 
I’m one of the senior members of the school Judo club.
How can I teach junior members to be polite?

Plan 
1. Write a topic sentence to answer the question.
2. Write examples as many as you can think of to support the topic sentence and main idea.
3. Exchange the planning sheet with a partner. Circle the good examples to support the topic sentence.
4. Choose or revise the examples, or add more examples to best answer the question.

Write a paragraph to answer the question with two or more examples to support your answer.
Try to use the vocabulary from the unit, adjectives with prefixes or suffixes. 

20 件のコメント:

  1. You should teach the young students about the relationship between the senior to junior.
    For example, you require them to greet deeply before and after the lesson.
    It would make them have fight spirits and know the importance of strong feelings.
    You could talk them about the politeness of Judo,such as respects and thanks, too.
    They would make up their mind to be polite, and concentrate on the lesson.

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  2. My opinion is show your result for them.
    If you force them to be polite, they get angly and they never change their manner.
    Because they not agree to change there manner yet.
    Most important thing is not what is normal in your club, but what they thing in that case.
    But if you show your result and earn the respect of them, they may start to change their manner by there self.
    It's easy for you, and it need cheaper cost than former way.
    And another way, that is do nothing and wait until they change their self is need too many time and it's unstable.
    That is the reason why I can't recommend you this way.
    Lastly, if there are only fool, you can treat them as they do.

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  3. You can say being polite to young members and show what is polite by your behaviour.
    You needs to behave as you are polite and formal person.
    For example, saying hello to anyone especially to senior to show your respect. Listening to others carefully and responding with clear voice. Also not being late for the time.
    And you say it's manner to young. If you will continue this polite behaviour, young will notice how manner is important.

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    1. I recomend you to teach them to be polite by showing sportmanship in many situation.
      For example, they have to having a good attitude to opponent during the match.
      Junior members can learn importance of behaving good to others.
      Holding a meeting is one of the ways to slove this problem, too.
      In the meeting, senior members and junior members can talk their opinions eachother.
      It maybe make their complaint fewer.
      On the other hand, to rely on special guest is also the way.
      All members can pay more attention to not only to be polite but also how to increase own skill.

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    2. I teach them to be polite by showing sportmanship in many situations.
      For example,having a good attitude to opponent during the match.
      Junior members will get to know importance of behaving good to others.
      As a solution,holding meetings are also effective,too.
      In the meeing, senior members tell junior ones not to be rude .
      Calling a special guest is also influence clubmates effectivly.
      They can larn not only to be polite but also how to increase own skill.

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    3. You should show your junior to be polite in many situation.
      For example, you’ll behave politely like bowing when you have a match.
      Juniors learn the politeness of Judo from the senior such as YOU.
      Also, it is one of the good ways to have a meeting regularly.
      Giving many opinions each other makes the junior concider themselves.
      Inviting the professional player or teacher is also the good way.
      They could learn not only to be polite but also how to be strong.

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    4. You should teach them to be polite by showing sportmanship in many situation.
      For example, having a attitude to opponents during the match.
      Junior members can learn importance of behaving good to others.
      Holding a meeting is another way to solve this problem.
      In the meeting, senior members and junior ones can talk their opinions with each other.
      On the other hand, to rely on special guest is also the way.
      All members can learn not only to be polite but also how to increase own skills.
      Then, junior members wii become polite.

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    5. You teach them to be polite by sportmanship in many situation.
      For example, having a good attitude to an opponent while the match.
      Junior members can get to know importance of taking a good attitude to others.
      Holding a meeting is one of the way to solve this problem, too.
      In the meeting, senior members and junior ones should talk their opinions each other.
      On the other hand, they rely on someone is also the way to solve this problem.
      All members can get to know not only good behaviors but also how to develop own skill.

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    6. You should teach the junior members to be polite by sportsmanship in many situations.
      For example, having a good attitude to opponents during the match.
      You show and get them to learn importance of behaving good to others.
      Holding a meeting is one of the ways to solve the problem, too.
      Senior members and juniors can exchange their opinions and take the first step toward the solution.
      On the other hand, to rely on special guest is also the way.
      All members will learn not only to be polite but also how to increase own skill.

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    7. You can teach them to be polite by showing sportmanship in many situation.
      For example, having a good attitude to opponent during the match. You bow to the opponent before and after the match, also greet to other people who are in the match place. Junior members can learn importance of behaving good to others.
      Holding a meeting is one of the ways to slove this problem. In the meeting, senior members and junior ones can talk their opinions each other. Also you can talk to junior members about how manner is important.
      On the other hand, to rely on special guest is also the way. All members can learn not only to be polite but also how to increase own skill. They can naturally know how to behave politeness.

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    8. I teach them to be polite by showing sportmanship in many situation.
      For example,you shuold teach them to know the way of having a good attitude to opponent during the match.Junior members can learn importance of behaving good to others.
      Holding a meeting is one of the ways to solve this probrem,too.
      In the meeting ,senior and junior members can talk their opinions each other.
      On the other hand, to rely on special guest is also the way .
      All members can learn not only to be polite but also how to improve their own skills.

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    9. You should teach junior members to behave politely when they play any sport.
      For example, we have to take a good attitude to opponent during the match.
      Junior members can learn importance of behaving good to others.
      Holding a meeting is one of the ways to solve this problem, too.
      In the meeting, seniors and juniors need to talk their opinions each other.
      On the other hand,to rely on the special guests is also good way.
      All members can learn not only to be polite but also how to increase own skills.

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    10. You should teach junior members to be polite by showing sportmanship in many situation.
      For example, you have to behave politely to opponent during the match.
      Junior members can learn importance of goood behavior to others.
      Holding a meeting is one of the ways to solve this problem, too.
      In the meeting, senior and junior members can give their opinions each other.
      On the other hand, to rely on special guest is also the good way.
      All members can learn not only to be polite, but also how to improve own skil.

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    11. Model You should teach the junior members the importance of being polite to be a good Judo player.
      First, you can remind the junior members that keeping good manners is part of Judo. For example, Judo players bow each other before and after a match.
      Also, you can show junior members how they should talk and behave to seniors or the coach yourself. They see and hear how you speak or do things in the club, and will naturally learn good language and a proper way to be a Judo player.
      They may not be polite to others or know good manners now, but will learn good behaviors soon like you did.

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  5. I think that young students today are rude.
    You should scold your students when they behave impolite. This thing is the most effective way for them to learn good manners.
    For example,Some students these days do not greet their teachers or elderly people when they meet for the first time a day.You should get angry if students don't greet you and teach how importance of greating others.
    Also,There are some students who talk with friends while you are teaching.You have to scole them not to do it forever.

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  6. I think you should teach your junior members attitude toword their seniors.
    For example, you teach how to use honorific words.
    Usig them is the basic manner to show respect.
    We use honorific words in many situations, so we have to become able to use them.
    Also, it is good to teach greetings.
    There are many students who don't greet people.
    When we greet people, we should make eye contact and greet with big voice.

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  7. Judo is a Japanese traditional sport. It is better to teach Japanese manners and cultures.
    For example,we have the seniority system. It is one of the Japanese cultures. We have to respect and use respect languages to seniors.
    Also,you need to clean our room or judo room. Cleaning makes people clean. If you clean your room or judo room, your mind will clear and become a polite person. And also you will have a sympathetic mind.
    If your juniors learn about the seniority system and cleaning, your juniors will become polite people.

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  8. The senior members teach detailed for the young students.
    All students who belong the new club don't know its tradition and behavior for the senior and teacher.
    If the senior students teach them a lot of time, they understand what is good and what is not good.
    When they don't listen and correct behavior, the senior had better scold them.
    Then they become polite.

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  9. Model You should teach the junior members the importance of being polite to be a good Judo player.
    First, you can remind the junior members that keeping good manners is part of Judo. For example, Judo players bow each other before and after a match.
    Also, you can show junior members how they should talk and behave to seniors or the coach yourself. They see and hear how you speak or do things in the club, and will naturally learn good language and a proper way to be a Judo player.
    They may not be polite to others or know good manners now, but will learn good behaviors soon like you did.

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