Underline the Main Idea and
Identify the Supporting Ideas/Examples of each Paragraph
Summarize what this article wants
to say within 50 words/three to four sentences.
Money gives unfair advantage for
professional sport teams.
Wealthy teams are more successful and make even more
money than less wealthy ones.
They can also recruit better coaches and players.
Sports fans want
to enjoy close and fair competitions but it seems difficult to
agree on effective solutions.
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Writter told us rich team is unfare.
返信削除And the article said many sports fans feel it,too.
Writter showed us two solution.
Rich teams shere money with poor teams or put a limit on player's salaries.
He also said it's not a easy way to slove it.
You need to mention what the topic is first.
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A lot of money, which is clear advantage, makes club unfair.
返信削除The wealthy clubs which have successful like Chelsea make money in several ways like financial supports.
This problem of money which fans even know should be solved by shairing money between rich teams to poor ones or decreasing player’s salaries.
Everyone wants teams to compete fairly.
Too many "which"s. Try to write more simply.
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Unfair advantage is the biggest problem in the sports.
返信削除One of the clear unfair is the money.
The wealthiest teams make money to sell the tickets, to broadcast their games and financial support.
Many sports fans feel that money creates an unfair advantages and they want to compete fairly. However, there are no easy solutions.
Combine the first and second sentences.
削除Explain why money creates unfair advantage.
Money is a clear unfair advantage for professional teams.
返信削除The wealtiest teams make money by giving financial support by thier sponsors.
Also many sports fans feel money is unfair advantage.
There are no easy solution to this problem, so we should continue to search ways to make sports fair.
1. What professional teams?
削除2. by giving financial support by <=really?
Weakthy Sports team has an unfair advantage over other teams that are as poor.
返信削除There are many ways for wealthy team to make money such as TV,financial sponcers,celling tickets because the team is strong and has famous players.
It is difficult to solve the problem that money gives some clubs a great advantage.We shoulld continue to consider how to find the solution.
1. Why wealthy teams have unfair advantage?
削除3. Why it is a problem?
The teams that have a lot of money have an unfair advantage over other teams that are not as wealthy.
返信削除The wealthiest teams like Manchester United make money in several ways, such as sell tickets at high prices.
Many sports fans feel that money in sports creates an unfair advantage because it seems impossible for poorer clubs to beat wealthy teams and pay the high salaries of the best players.
The solutions to the problems are not easy but sports fans want teams to compete fairly.
1. What teams?
削除2. Why unfair?
Money in sports makes unfair advantage for professional teams.
返信削除The wealthy teams can make money in several ways and money has great effect on team.
There are no easy ways to solve this problem.
Sports fans want teams to compete fairly, so we should search good solutions.
Explain why money creates unfair advantage.
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A lot of money gives professional sports teams an unfair advantage over other poorer teams.
返信削除Many sports fans know that money affects so much and creates an unfair advantage.
At that time, there are no easy solutions to the problem, but sharing the money and putting a limit on players’ salaries are kind of possibilities.
Explain why money creates unfair advantage.
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A lot of money make their club an unfair advantage.
返信削除There are no easy solutions to the problem which is an unfair advantage.
Sports funs love close competitions betweeen athletes, but everyone wants teams to compete fairly.
We should continue to seach for ways to make sports fair.
Explain why money creates unfair advantage.
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3. , but ...<=?????
Many sports fans think that how strong is it means how wealthy is it.
返信削除In fact, top 10 richest soccer club are popular like Man-U,Real Madrid and Barcelona.
Thease teams can earn money from TVstations, sponsors and fans.
There are several ways to slove this problem but it is not easy.
1. ?????
削除2. What do you want to say?
4. What is the problem?