To; Linda Smith Students in the United States don't need long vacation because many children lose learning time.First of all, most students can enjoy their trip during short summer vacation.Long vacation makes children bored.Also long vacation makes them lazy,and after the long vacation they have to review last year's studies.For these two reasons,the long summer vacation is not good for students in US.
To Linda Smith I'm agree with your opinion. First,I think studying at the shcool isn't everything. When we saw beautiful things in real,we never forget. Also,vacation makes children happy becouse they can do many things. Children should experience such kind of feelings. That's why,having vacation is important.
To:James Walsh, I don't think children need a longer vacation, neither. First of all, many children spend their vacation on playing at home, and they don't study harder. Also, their parents work outside and busy so they don't have enough time to travel to somewhere during their children' vacation. Finally, children sometimes prefer doing same things to trying new things, so they don't get new experience. For these reasons, children don't need a longer vacation.
To:James Walsh, I don't think children need a longer vacation, either. First of all, many children spend their vacation at home, but they don't study harder. Also, their parents work outside and busy so they don't have enough time to travel to somewhere during their children' vacation. Finally, children sometimes tend to do same things instead of doing new things, so they don't get new experiences. For these reasons, children don't need a longer vacation.
To: Linda Smith, parent I agree with Vacations Are a Way of Learning. First, Vacations are so long that we can learn anything you want. Finally, we need experience in the world. In Japan, we can experience anything only in the vacations because we have a lot of school days. For these two reasons, long vacations are important to our learning.
Well reasoned but not explained enough. After 2, add another sentence to explain, or add an example. 3.=> Also, 3. anything=> something new or different
To:Linda Smith I agree with Vacations Are a Way of Learning.I think we need to someting new or different during vacation. First, vacations are so long that we can learn anything you want. We can't learn different things in the class. Also, we need experience in the world. In Japan, we can experience something new only in the vacations because we have a lot of school days. For these two reasons, long vacations are important to our learning.
To Linda Smith I agree with you because I think it is important to do things that they can't do at school, too. First, they can get jobs and experience what they need for the future. Also, they have enough time to think themselves. Finally, they can relax and get away from stress.
To Linda Smith Vacations are good for childrens because they can spend thier time with a valuable experience to become an adult. First,children need do anything without their parents.For example,children can use thier free time with a camp. Also,they should go camping without parents.It,s important experience to become an adult. For these reasons,vacations are very important for childrens.
To Linda Smith Long vacations are good for childrens because they can spend thier time with a valuable experience to become an adult. First,they can experience that they normally can't without thier parents. I think camping is the best example because they can learn how to live by oneself or how to communicate to others. It's important experience to become an adult. For these reasons,long vacations are vary important for childrens.
To:Linda Smith, I think the summer vacation is important. First, we can learn only few things in the school, for example study. But we can learn everything not in the school. Also, We are all busy during the school. If we want to try to something, in the summer vacation, we have enough time to learn. For these reasons, summer vacation is a important for all people.
To:Linda Smith, I think the summer vacation is important. First, we can learn only few things in the school, for example study. But we can learn everything not in the school. Also, We are all busy during the school. If we want to try to something, in the summer vacation, we have enough time to learn. For these reasons, summer vacation is important for all people.
Well structued but not explained either long or short. 1. long or short? 2. ... we spend most of their time in school on studying. 4. => We have enough time to ... in a long summer vacation.
To:Lida Smith, I think the summer vacation is important. First, we spend most of our time in school on studying. But we can learn everything not in the school. If we want to try to something, we have enough time to learn in the long summer vacation. For these reasons, summer vacation is important for all people.
To James Walsh. I disagree with your idea because they can get thier new skils or characteres. First,chlidren lost their time and they lack their originality.I think people have their own feature is more important than they can study. Also,it is important to do their favorite things because they can find thier dreams. So,the long summer vacation is important for children.
Well reasoned but quite a few errors. 1. caracters=> experience 2. First, it is a good opportunity for children to develop their personality. 3. => During a long summer vacation, they ... 4. => to find ...
To: Linda Smith I think long summer vacation is good, too. First of all, long summer vacation is a great opportunity. Children can find what they want to do and do many things that they can't do in a school. Also, it gives time to be with their family. They can relax and take to do together. For these reasons, long summer vacation is good.
To; Linda Smith
返信削除Students in the United States don't need long vacation because many children lose learning time.First of all, most students can enjoy their trip during short summer vacation.Long vacation makes children bored.Also long vacation makes them lazy,and after the long vacation they have to review last year's studies.For these two reasons,the long summer vacation is not good for students in US.
Good writing.
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3, 4=> Reorganize; 3. bored and lazy 4. catch up...
To Linda Smith
返信削除I'm agree with your opinion.
First,I think studying at the shcool isn't everything.
When we saw beautiful things in real,we never forget.
Also,vacation makes children happy becouse they can do many things.
Children should experience such kind of feelings.
That's why,having vacation is important.
Well structured.
削除1. explain the opinion.
3. can't children do many thing in a shorter vacation?
4. such kind of feeling?????
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返信削除To:James Walsh,
削除I don't think children need a longer vacation, neither.
First of all, many children spend their vacation on playing at home, and they don't study harder.
Also, their parents work outside and busy so they don't have enough time to travel to somewhere during their children' vacation.
Finally, children sometimes prefer doing same things to trying new things, so they don't get new experience.
For these reasons, children don't need a longer vacation.
Well explained.
削除1. neither???
2. , and=> , but
4. prefer doing ... to trying=> tend to do ... instead of doing ...
To:James Walsh,
削除I don't think children need a longer vacation, either.
First of all, many children spend their vacation at home, but they don't study harder.
Also, their parents work outside and busy so they don't have enough time to travel to somewhere during their children' vacation.
Finally, children sometimes tend to do same things instead of doing new things, so they don't get new experiences.
For these reasons, children don't need a longer vacation.
To: Linda Smith, parent
返信削除I agree with Vacations Are a Way of Learning.
First, Vacations are so long that we can learn anything you want.
Finally, we need experience in the world. In Japan, we can experience anything only in the vacations because we have a lot of school days.
For these two reasons, long vacations are important to our learning.
Well reasoned but not explained enough.
削除After 2, add another sentence to explain, or add an example.
3.=> Also,
3. anything=> something new or different
To:Linda Smith
削除I agree with Vacations Are a Way of Learning.I think we need to someting new or different during vacation.
First, vacations are so long that we can learn anything you want. We can't learn different things in the class.
Also, we need experience in the world. In Japan, we can experience something new only in the vacations because we have a lot of school days.
For these two reasons, long vacations are important to our learning.
To Linda Smith
返信削除I agree with you because I think it is important to do things that they can't do at school, too.
First, they can get jobs and experience what they need for the future.
Also, they have enough time to think themselves.
Finally, they can relax and get away from stress.
Well reasoned but not explained enough.
削除2. => do a part time job
3. think about things that they usually don't. For example ...
To Linda Smith
返信削除Vacations are good for childrens because they can spend thier time with a valuable experience to become an adult.
First,children need do anything without their parents.For example,children can use thier free time with a camp.
Also,they should go camping without parents.It,s important experience to become an adult.
For these reasons,vacations are very important for childrens.
Well explained.
削除2. ... they can experience that they normally can't.
3. Why camping???
To Linda Smith
削除Long vacations are good for childrens because they can spend thier time with a valuable experience to become an adult.
First,they can experience that they normally can't without thier parents.
I think camping is the best example because they can learn how to live by oneself or how to communicate to others.
It's important experience to become an adult.
For these reasons,long vacations are vary important for childrens.
To:Linda Smith,
返信削除I think the summer vacation is important.
First, we can learn only few things in the school, for example study.
But we can learn everything not in the school.
Also, We are all busy during the school.
If we want to try to something, in the summer vacation, we have enough time to learn.
For these reasons, summer vacation is a important for all people.
To:Linda Smith,
削除I think the summer vacation is important.
First, we can learn only few things in the school, for example study.
But we can learn everything not in the school.
Also, We are all busy during the school.
If we want to try to something, in the summer vacation, we have enough time to learn.
For these reasons, summer vacation is important for all people.
Well structued but not explained either long or short.
削除1. long or short?
2. ... we spend most of their time in school on studying.
4. => We have enough time to ... in a long summer vacation.
To:Lida Smith,
削除I think the summer vacation is important.
First, we spend most of our time in school on studying.
But we can learn everything not in the school.
If we want to try to something, we have enough time to learn in the long summer vacation.
For these reasons, summer vacation is important for all people.
To James Walsh.
返信削除I disagree with your idea because they can get thier new skils or characteres.
First,chlidren lost their time and they lack their originality.I think people have their own feature is more important than they can study.
Also,it is important to do their favorite things because they can find thier dreams.
So,the long summer vacation is important for children.
Well reasoned but quite a few errors.
削除1. caracters=> experience
2. First, it is a good opportunity for children to develop their personality.
3. => During a long summer vacation, they ...
4. => to find ...
To: Linda Smith
返信削除I think long summer vacation is good, too.
First of all, long summer vacation is a great opportunity.
Children can find what they want to do and do many things that they can't do in a school.
Also, it gives time to be with their family.
They can relax and take to do together.
For these reasons, long summer vacation is good.
Well structured and explained.
削除2. opportunity to ...
4. ... and do things together