2017年5月3日水曜日

Writing-Sr.2-May 3rd

Reading-1  Vacation from Work: Employee Vacation Policy/Toy’s Inc.
Which option do you prefer, to choose when to take vacation days or to take vacation when the factory is closed? 
Write your answer in four to six sentences.

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  1. I prefer option 1, because I can take a vacation when I want to have. For example, I can be absent from the office when I get sick, or I can plan a vacation around my family needs. Also, if the factory close for two weeks, the number of toys we produce will be reduced and my salary will be decreased, too. If I don't have enough money, I can't enjoy my vacation a lot.

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    1. I prefer they take their vacation when they want.
      For example, I can be absent from the office when I get sick, and I can plan a vacation around my family needs.
      Also, if the factory close for two weeks, the number of toys we produce will be reduced and my salary will be gone down, too.
      If I don't have enough money, I can't enjoy my vacation a lot.

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    2. I prefer I take my vacation when I want.
      For example, I can be absent from the office when I get sick. And I can plan a vacation around my family needs.
      Also, if the factory close for two weeks, the number of toys we produce will be reduced and my salary will be gone down, too.
      If I don't have enough money, I can't enjoy my vacation a lot.


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    3. TS+SS-1: I prefer to take vacation days when I want to because it gives me flexibility.
      For example, I can use my vacation days when I get sick.
      Also, I can plan my vaccation with my family more flexibly.
      SS-2: Another reason is our business and salary.
      If the factory closes for two weeks, we'll produce fewer toys and lose business for the period.
      I'm worried that my salary is cut/reduced and I no longer will be able to enjoy my vacation days.

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  2. I prefer everyone takes a vacation at the same time.
    I like traveling famous places in Japan also in the foreign country.
    I don't mind seasons.I just want to visit many famous places!
    And also after Company Holiday,I can get many kinds of souvenirs at the same time.
    For these reasons,I prefer everyone takes a vacation at the same time.

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    1. I prefer everyone takes a vacation at the same time.
      I like traveling to famous places in Japan or in the foreign countries.
      I don't mind seasons. I just want to visit many famous places, so I don't need to choose the season to take a vacation.
      Also after the vacation, I can get many kinds of souvenirs at the same time at my office.

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    2. I prefer everyone takes a vacation at the same time.
      I like traveling to famous places in Japan or in the foreign countries.
      I don't mind seasons.I just want to visit many famous places,so I don't need to choose the seasons to take a vacation.
      Also after the vacation,I can get many kinds of souvenirs at the same time at my office and everyone refreshed.
      So everyone can work very relaxed.

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    3. I prefer ...
      2.3.4=> That's because I can travel longer if the factory is closed for two weeks.
      I'd like to visit as many famous places in Japan or abroad.
      It's not important when to travel to me.

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  3. I prefer to use my vacation anytime.
    First reason:I can spend holidays with my family like christmas.If I could use my vacation with my family on christmas I can get some presents from Santa Claus.
    Second reason:If all employees use their vacation for two weeks the business of the campany would be losing during the two weeks.But if the employees could use their vacation anytime the campany can run all time.

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    1. I prefer to take a vacation anytime.
      First reason,I can spend holidays with my family like Christmas.
      If I could take my vacation with my family on Christmas,I can get some presents from Santa Claus.
      Second reason,if all employees take their vacation for two weeks,the business of the company would be losing during the two weeks.
      But if the employees could take their vacation anytime,the company can run all the time.
      For these reasons,I prefer to take a vacation anytime.

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    2. I prefer to take a vacation anytime.
      First reason,I can spend holidays with my family.
      If I could take my time with my family I could talk about my life to my parents.
      Second reason,if all employees take their vacation for two weeks,the business of the company would be losing during the two weeks.
      But if the employees could take their vacation anytime,the company could run all the time.
      For these reasons,I prefer to take a vacation anytime.

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    3. 2. First, ...
      3. I will be able to talk more about my life with ...
      4. Second, ... we'll lose our business for the period.
      5. => It doesn't make sense to lose business for vacation.

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  4. I choose OPTION !
    I want to go foreign countries.
    Particularly vacation is crowded in airport.
    If I decided to vacation, airport wouldn't so crowded.
    I want to decided to the day which doesn't so crowded.

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    1. I prefer to take my vacation anytime!
      I want to go foreign country during my vacation.
      If I could choose my vacation I can travel without traffic jam.
      This means I can spend my time without stress during the vacation.
      This is why I prefer to take my time anytime.

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    2. I prefer to take my vacation any time.
      I want to go foreign country during my vacation.
      If I chosen my vacation I can travel without traffic jam.
      I want to spend my time without stress during the vacation.
      This is why I prefer to take my time anytime.

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    3. 2. First, I can enjoy traveling more if I can choose the time.
      During holiday seasons, many places, roads, trains and airplanes are all crowded.
      I want to relax during my vacation rather than being stressed.

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  5. I prefer to choose when to take vacation days.
    I like idol. They held concert not only vacation season all year around.
    If they held concert when a day that I have to work, I can't go their conceret and feel sad.
    If I can choose my vacation days, I will plan to my schedules based concert schedules.
    And also, I want to trip to somewhere with my family, we can trip without crush.
    So, I want to choose when to take vacation days.

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    1. I prefer to take vacation days.
      I like idol. They held concert not only vacation season all year around.
      If they held concert when a day that I have to work, I can't go their concert and feel sad.
      And also, I want to trip to somewhere with my family, we can trip without any crush.
      So, I want to choose when to take vacation days.

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    2. I prefer to choose when to take vacation days.
      I like idols such as Johnny's. They held concert not only vacation season but also all year around.
      If they held concert when a day that I have to work, I can't go to their concert and feel sad.
      If I can choose my vacation days, I will plan to my schedules based idol's concert.
      And also, I want to travel to somewhere with my family, we can travel without any crush.
      So, I want to choose when to take vacation days.

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    3. 2.3.4.5=> First, I'll be able go to my favorite idles' concerts more if I can choose my vacation days.
      6. Also, I'll be able to travel with my family when places, roads, trains or airplanes aren't so crowded with other travellers.

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  6. I prefer the employees take their vacation anytime.
    I like traveling and if the vacation is the same time with another people, it' difficult to maka a reservation for hotel or plain.
    And also the place will be clowded with people and it is hard to watch closely.
    So I think it's better way to take the vacation when they want.

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    1. I prefer the emplpyees take their vacation anytime.
      I like traveling. If the vacation is the same time with another people, it's difficult to make a reservation for hotel or plain.
      And also the place I go will be clowded with people and it is hard to watch closely.
      So I think it's better way to take the vacation when they want.

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    2. I prefer to take vacation anytime.
      I like traveling.
      If the vacation is the same time with other people, it's difficult to make a reservation for hotel or plane.
      And also the place I go will be clowded with people and it is hard to watch I visit closely.
      So I want to take vacation anytime.

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    3. 3. ... to book rooms and airplane tickets.
      4. Also, most tourist destinations are too crowded with other travellers.
      I won't be able to enjoy seeing things and places comfortably.
      So=> That's why...

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