2017年5月29日月曜日

Writing Test-Jr.3E.May 29th

P2Q Writing Test
解答は4つの観点で採点されます。観点ごとに０～４点の5段階で評価され、得点の満点は16点となります。

内容　課題で求められている内容（意見とそれに沿った理由2つ）が含まれているかどうか

  • アドバイス :自分の意見と合わせて、その理由を明確にしましょう。その際に、多様な観点から考えて、意見を支える論拠や説明がより説得力のあるものになるようにしましょう。

構成　英文の構成や流れがわかりやすく論理的であるか

  • アドバイス :伝えたい情報の流れや展開を示す表現（接続詞など）を効果的に使って、自分の意見とその理由や英文全体の構成をより分かりやすくするようにしましょう。

語彙　課題に相応しい語彙を正しく使えているか

  • アドバイス :正しい綴りや意味で使われているかを意識しながら、自分の意見とその理由を十分伝えられるようにしましょう

文法　文構造のバリエーションやそれらを正しく使えているか

  • アドバイス :同じような形の文の繰り返しにならないように、多様な文のパターンを適切に使用して、自分の意見とその理由をより効果的に伝えられるようにしましょう。また、文単位で書くことを意識し、So much fun.やBecause it is fun.のように不完全な文を書かないように気を付けましょう。
・あなたは外国人の知り合いから次のQuestionをされました。Questionに対し、あなたの意見と理由２つを英語で書きなさい。・かならずQuestionに対応した答えを書いてください。
・語数の目安: 50～60語 => 5~6 Short Sentences
    1. Answer.  
    2-1. Reason-1 -> 2-2. Explain/Example
    3-1. Reason-2 -> 3-2. Explain/Example
    4. Conclusion.
Example: Do you think people should exercise regularly?
1. I think people should exercise regularly. There are two reasons.
2-1. First, regular exercise is good for our health.  
       2-2. We can make a strong body and become healthier.
3-1. Second, regular exercise is good for our mind. 
       3-2. For example, we can refresh ourselves by doing yoga.
4. For these reasons, regular exercise is good for health.
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Question: Do you think students should take part in club activities at school?
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  1. Unknown2017年5月29日 19:19

    I think students should take part in club activities at school.There are two reasons.
    First, club activities are good for our school life.
    We can more enjoy our school life .
    Second, club activities are good for our future.
    For example,we can learn courtesy for a teacher .
    For these reasons, students should take part in club activities at school.

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  2. Mei Asai2017年5月29日 19:19

    I think students should take part in club activities at school.
    First,club activities are good for learning how to make nice relationship with other graders.
    And it'll be able to use in the future.
    They can make more friends and good team work,too.

    Second, they can enjoy club activities and the school life.
    They have many different club activities at school so they can choose a club activitie which interested in.


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    1. Mei Asai2017年6月1日 19:03

      I think students should take part in club activities at school.

      First,club activities are good for learning hoe to make nice relationship with club mates.
      And they'll be able to use it in the future.

      Second,they can enjoy club activities and school life.
      They can choose a club they interested in.

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  3. 西島由依2017年5月29日 19:19

    I think students should take part in club activities at school.
    There are two reasons.
    First,we can learn many things at the club activities.
    We can learn in class,of course but there are many important things in club activities,too.
    Second, we can make a lot of friends there.
    We always have fun together.
    For these reasons, students should take part in club activities at school.

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    1. 西島由依2017年6月1日 19:07

      I think students should take part in club activities at school.
      There are two reasons.
      First, we can learn many things from the club activities.
      We can learn in class, of course but there are many important things such as friend ship and good experiences in club activities.
      second, we can make a lot of friends there.
      I have two best friends, and we are all in the same club.
      We always have fun together.
      For these reasons, students should take part in club activities at school.

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  4. kanta hosoi2017年5月29日 19:19

    I think students should take part in club activities at school.
    First,take part in club activities is good for our school life.
    We can make friends in the club and spend good time with them.
    Second, take part in club activities is good for our mind.
    We are happy when we doing club activities and refresh our selves.
    For these reasons, take part in club activities at scool is good for our school life and mind.

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    1. kanta hosoi2017年6月1日 19:10

      I think students should take part in club activities at school.
      First,take part in club activities is good for student's school life.
      Students can make friends in the club and spend good time with them.
      They can help each other.
      Second,take part in club activities is good for student's mind.
      Students are happy when they are doing club activities and refresh themselves.
      For these reasons, take part in club activities at school is good for our school life and mind.

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  5. Mao Yamamoto2017年5月29日 19:19

    I think students should take part in club activities at school.
    First, take part in club activities is good for us.
    We can learn many things about the sport and culuture from each club.
    Second ,it is good for make a friendship.
    If we in a club, we can meet many people have same hobbies.
    So, it is very good chance to make many friends.
    For these reasons, take part in club is very important for us.

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    1. Mao Yamamoto2017年6月1日 19:09

      I think students should take part in club activities at school.
      First, take part in club activities is good for us.
      Students can learn many thing about sport and culuture.
      Second, it is good for make a friendship.
      If students take part in club activities, we can meet many people
      who have a same hobbies.
      For these reasons, take part in club is very important for us.

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  6. Unknown2017年5月29日 19:20

    I think students should take part in club activities.
    First, students can learn different things from school,.
    For example,they can learn about train,music,traditional Japanese manner,and so on.
    Second,they can do something they like after school.
    They are busy to study,they don't have enough time to do their favorite thing.

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    1. Unknown2017年6月1日 19:11

      I think students should take part in club activities.
      First,Students can do different things from school.
      For example,They can do to research train,play many kinds of musical instruments,play basketball in the club.
      Second,they can do something they like after school.
      They can do their favorite thing as they want.

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  7. Aoi Miyashita2017年5月29日 19:21

    I think students should take part in club activities at school. There are two reasons.
    First, club activities makes us happy. When you play some sports and the instrument, you'll relax.
    Second, you can learn many things from club activity members. When you have wrong problems, members will tell you some advice.
    For these reasons, club activities are important for students.

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    1. Aoi Miyashita2017年6月1日 19:07

      I think students should take part in club activities at school. There are two reasons.
      First, club activities makes students happy. For example, you can talk a lot with your teammates.
      Second, you can learn many things from your teammates. When you in trouble, teammates will tell you some advice.
      For these reasons, club activities are important for students.

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