2020年8月19日水曜日

Writing Practice-Sr.2-Aug.19

Write what you need to do as a high school student in 1 sen (TS) and 3 supporting sentences (SS).

(TS) I need to study harder as a high school student.
  I want to improve my grades.
  I want to find what interests me to study in college.
  If I study hard, I can enjoy my high school life more. 

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  1. I need to try a lot of things as a high school students.
    As an adult, I can’t move freely.
    I can be interested in more field.
    It makes it easier to find what I want in college.

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    1. #2 When I start working/grow up to an adult

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  2. I need to study much harder than now as a high school student.
    I have to get good results on my exams to get a chance to go to the good university.
    I have to improve my math and social studies’ score.
    I have to review the classes more often.


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    1. #2 good grades
      #3 because they ...
      #4 ... to

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    2. I have to get good grades on my exams to get a chance to go to the good university.
      I have to improve my math and social studies’ score because I’m not good at them.
      I have to review the classes more often to memorize efficiently.

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    3. I have to get good grades on my exams to get a chance to go to the good university.
      I have to improve my math and social studies’ score because I’m not good at them.
      I have to review the classes more often to memorize efficiently.

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  3. I need to know doing what makes me happy as a high school student. Knowing what is my favorite is very important to decide which university should I attend. High school life is little hard so I should do favorite thing. I can deepen knowledge about favorite thing.

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    1. #1 ... know what ...
      #2 ... what my favorite things to do is ...
      #3 ... but I ...
      #4 If I know ..., I can ...

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    2. I need to know what makes me happy as a high school student.
      It is useful to decide which university should I attend.
      I need to do that to get through the hard school life.
      If I know what makes me happy, I can deepen knowledge about favorite thing.

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  4. I need to study hard as a high school student.
    I have to to enter a good university.
    I enter the company I want to join in.
    I can do what I want in the future.

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    1. #3 want to work for a company that I want

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    2. I want to work for a company that I want.

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  5. I need to focus on myself as a high school student.
    I should think about me well to prepare for the future.
    It is not available to focus on myself when I start working.
    I need to learn a lot of things to survive life.

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    1. #1 find more about myself
      #2 find what I want to do ...
      #3 I can't ...
      #4 to live a good life

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    2. I need to find more about myself as a high school student.
      I should find what I want to do in the future.
      I need to learn a lot of things to live a good life.

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  6. I need to not only study but also think about my future as a high school student.
    I have to review some main subjects and get good scores on the tests.
    I have to read books and think about my future.
    I have to have interests to the world.

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    1. #2 ... get good grades.
      #3 I should be more interested in what's happening in the world.

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    2. I have to review some main subjects and get good grades.
      I should be more interested in what’s happening in the world.

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  7. As a high school student, I need to hand in homework.
    Homework will marked for the grade.
    It brings me new knowledges.
    I can discover something from it.

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    1. #1 ... my homework in time.
      #2 ... affects my grades.
      #3 knowledge.
      #4 ... learn ...

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    2. As a high school student, I need to hand in my homework in time.
      Homework affects my grades.
      It brings me new knowledge.
      I can learn something from it.

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  8. I can find I want to do in the future.
    I need to study harder.
    I have to improve my Japanese score

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    1. Write a topic sentence.
      #1 ... what I ...
      #3 ... grades

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    2. I can find what I want to do in the future.
      I have to improve my Japanese grades.

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