-> Review: subject-verb agreement, Singular/Plural, a/an/the, countable-uncountable nouns
(TS) I want to help people in
need.
(SS-1) I like helping people. <=
(SD-1) It makes me feel accomplished.
(SS-2) Also, I like seeing
people smiling. <= (SD-2) If I help people, I can see more smiles.
(SS-3) People may thank me for helping them. <= (SD-3) I’ll feel good when my job is appreciated.
(SS-3) People may thank me for helping them. <= (SD-3) I’ll feel good when my job is appreciated.
I want to help people with scientific skills.
返信削除I like science.
I want to help people who have problems with thier health and make them happy.
Also, I want to work with details.
To become to do that, I need to study harder.
#3 This is the TS, not an SS, unnecessary.
削除#5 To help people with scientific skills, I ...
I like helping people. It makes me feel happy and a sense of achievement.
削除I like science. Working with what I'm interested in is important for me to enjoy my job.
I am interested to do house renovating.
返信削除I want to work different people and places.
I want my job to be creative.
I need to see the results of my work.
If I get the job like that, I can make it my hobby.
#1 designing or actual building work?
削除#5 ... I can enjoy it just like a hobby.
I’m interested in a doctor.
返信削除I like to help others.
I want to save people’s life.
Doctors need to know many things and be good at working with a team.
I need to study hard and communicate well with many people.
#1 ... in becoming a doctor.
削除I’m interested in becoming a doctor.
削除I like to help others.
I feel happy when they thank me.
I want to save people’s life.
I want to save their smiles and every day life.
Doctors need to know many things and be good at working with a team.
I need to study hard and communicate well with many people.
I want to be a doctor.
返信削除I want to help people who are suffering.
I would like to support both patients and their families, both physically and mentally.
Also, I want to make patients' smile.
It gives me a sense of achievement in my work.
#2 ... who need medical cares
削除#3 ... help ... families.
#4 ... see my patients smile
#5 ... from the job
I want to be a doctor.
削除I want to help people who need medical cares.
→The number of healthy people will increase by treatment.
I would like to help patients and their families.
→I will able to solve the problems of many people and they will be happy.
Also, I want to see my patients smile.
→I am healed when I see people smile
It gives me a sense of achievement from the job.
I want to be a flight attendant.
返信削除I like having different plans to do every day.
I want to visit and see many places on business.
I have to be responsible for keeping customers safe and comfortable.
I also have to be good at having communication with foreigners.
#2 ... to work on different plans and schedules
削除#4 ... passengers ... during the flight.
#5 ... interacting with people with different languages and cultural backgrounds.
Working on different plans and schedules makes me excited.
削除I’ll feel satisfied when I go to the many places on business.
Keeping passengers comfortable and safe during the flight is one of the biggest responsibilities.
If I interact with people with different languages, I’ll feel good.
I want to be a children carer.
返信削除I want to do this job because I like children and their smile.
I want to connect with many different kind of children.
If I do this job, I need to keep children safe.
I will take care of children's small incident.
#1 child-carer
削除#2 I like ... and seeing their smiles.
#3 interact with
#5 ... need to learn how to care children safely
削除I want to be a child-carer.
I like children and seeing their smiles.
I always receive the power from their smiles.
I want to interact with many different kind of children.
I should find good points for each children.
If I do this job, I need to keep children safe.
I need to learn how to care children safely.
I want to be a doctor.
返信削除I want to help people who have illness. Also, I want to work with numbers. I need to study harder.
#3 numbers?
削除need to be good at science
need to have good medical knowledge and experience