Nisitokyo city is located Eastern part of Tama area. The population is about 205,000. They are 15 elementary school and 9 junior high school. It has three big parks, so many children play in those parks.
Nisitokyo city is in a north of Tokyo. The population is about 205,000. There are 15 elementary schools and 9 junior high schools. It has three big parks, so many children play in those parks.
Koganei is in a suburb of Tokyo. It’s a residential town with a population of approximately 100,000. The weather is very high in the summer and very law in the winter. There are more than ten school, three colleges and some gyms. My town is very quiet but the neighborhood is very kindness.
Koganei is a suburb of Tokyo. It’s a residential town with a population of approximately 100,000. The temperature is very high in the summer and very law in the winter. There are more than ten junior and high schools, three colleges and same gyms. My town is very quiet and neighborhoods are very kindness. I lone my town.
Mitaka is in a suburb of Tokyo. The population of Mitaka is about 180,000 people. It’s a comfortable town. The weather is hot and humid temperatures around 31 degrees Celsius in summer. There are Inokashira Park and Jiburi Museum in the city. Inokashira Park and Jiburi Museum are popular tourist spot. There are so many friendly people, so it’s nice place to live in.
Mitaka is in a suburb of Tokyo. The population is about 180,000 people. It’s a comfortable town. The weather is humid and high temperatures are around 31 degrees Celsius in summer. There are popular attractions like Inokashira Park and Jiburi Museum.
Mitaka city is suburb is Tokyo. It’s a residential town with a population of approximately 180,000. The weather is sunny with high temperatures around 34 degrees Celsius in summer. There are good colleges, community centers and Ghibli Museum in the city. The city has a league station that many people use. The neighbors are kindness and bright, so it’s a nice place to live in.
Mistake city is suburb of Tokyo. It’s a residiential town with a population of approximately 180,000. The weather is mild with hot temperatures around 34 degrees Celsius in summer. There are good colleges, community centers and Ghibli Museum in the city. The city has a large station that many people use. The neighbors are open and friendly, so it’s a nine place to live in.
Mitaka city is in the middle of Tokyo. Mitaka is a busy town. The population is about 150,000. It is famous for the Ghibli museum. There are many libraries in Mitaka. Many people use the libraries to study and read books. The neighbors are kind. I like this city.
Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo. It’s a residential town with a population of approximately 180,000. The weather is mild with high temperatures around 31 degrees Celsius in summer. There are good parks, gyms and the Ghibli Museum in the city. The neighbors are kind and sociable, so it’s a nice place to live in.
Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo. It’s a residential town with a population of approximately 180,000. The weather is mild with high temperatures around 31 degrees Celsius in summer. There are good parks, gyms and the Ghibli Museum in the city. Many foreign tourists go to the Ghibli Museum. The neighbors are kind and sociable, so it’s a nice place to live in.
Kodaira city is in a suburb of Tokyo. The population is about 196000. The mayor is Masanori Kobayashi. There are eleven junior high school in this city. There are famous for blueberry in this city.
Kodaira city is in a suburb of Tokyo. The population is about 196000. The mayor is Masanori Kobayashi. There are eleven junior high schools in this city. It is famous for blueberry i this city. This city is loved by a lot of citizen.
Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo. It’s a residential town with a population of approximately 180,000. The weather is mild with high temperatures around 30 degrees Celsius in summer. There are good schools, parks and GHIBULI Museum in the city. It’s famous for its convenience because Mitaka station has many lines. It’s convenient and surrounded by nature, so it’s a nice place to live in.
Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo prefecture. It’s convenient town to live with family. It has two hundred thousand people. The weather is calm with middle temperatures. It has jiburi museum, It is good place to go with friends. I like my town, because it make me happy.
Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo prefecture. It’s convenient town, because it has a lot of shops. The population is two hundred thousand people. The wether is clam with mild temperatures. It has jiburi museum, it is good place to go with friends.
Tokyo is the capital in Japan. It is one of the famous city in the world. Tokyo has a population of about 9 million. In summer, Tokyo is about 30 degrees. It has Tokyotower, In summer, from the top you can see a superb view. I like it because it has to make happy.
Tokyo is the capital of Japan. It is one of the world's famous cities. Tokyo has a population of about 9 million. It has Tokyotower it is great tower. I like it because it has to make happy.
Chofu city in in suburb in Tokyo. The population is about 229000. Chofu is famous for Jindaiji-temple. Many people visit there on new years day. The temperature is high in summer. In winter, Chofu is very cold. Chofu has many nature.
Musashino city is in suburb in Tokyo. The population is about 148,000. In summer, it is about 30degrees Musashino is famous for Kichijoji and there many shops. It is very good and comfortable to live in.
Nisitokyo city is located Eastern part of Tama area.
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They are 15 elementary school and 9 junior high school.
It has three big parks, so many children play in those parks.
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Nisitokyo city is in a north of Tokyo.
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There are 15 elementary schools and 9 junior high schools.
It has three big parks, so many children play in those parks.
Koganei is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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The weather is very high in the summer and very law in the winter.
There are more than ten school, three colleges and some gyms.
My town is very quiet but the neighborhood is very kindness.
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Koganei is a suburb of Tokyo.
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The temperature is very high in the summer and very law in the winter.
There are more than ten junior and high schools, three colleges and same gyms.
My town is very quiet and neighborhoods are very kindness.
I lone my town.
Mitaka is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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It’s a comfortable town.
The weather is hot and humid temperatures around 31 degrees Celsius in summer.
There are Inokashira Park and Jiburi Museum in the city.
Inokashira Park and Jiburi Museum are popular tourist spot.
There are so many friendly people, so it’s nice place to live in.
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Mitaka is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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It’s a comfortable town.
The weather is humid and high temperatures are around 31 degrees Celsius in summer.
There are popular attractions like Inokashira Park and Jiburi Museum.
Mitaka city is suburb is Tokyo.
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The weather is sunny with high temperatures around 34 degrees Celsius in summer.
There are good colleges, community centers and Ghibli Museum in the city.
The city has a league station that many people use.
The neighbors are kindness and bright, so it’s a nice place to live in.
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Mistake city is suburb of Tokyo.
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The weather is mild with hot temperatures around 34 degrees Celsius in summer.
There are good colleges, community centers and Ghibli Museum in the city.
The city has a large station that many people use.
The neighbors are open and friendly, so it’s a nine place to live in.
Mitaka city is in the middle of Tokyo.
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The population is about 150,000.
It is famous for the Ghibli museum.
There are many libraries in Mitaka.
Many people use the libraries to study and read books.
The neighbors are kind.
I like this city.
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Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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The neighbors are kind and open.
It’s a nice place to live in.
Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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The weather is mild with high temperatures around 31 degrees Celsius in summer.
There are good parks, gyms and the Ghibli Museum in the city.
The neighbors are kind and sociable, so it’s a nice place to live in.
Very well organized and written!
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Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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The weather is mild with high temperatures around 31 degrees Celsius in summer.
There are good parks, gyms and the Ghibli Museum in the city.
Many foreign tourists go to the Ghibli Museum.
The neighbors are kind and sociable, so it’s a nice place to live in.
Kodaira city is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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The mayor is Masanori Kobayashi.
There are eleven junior high school in this city.
There are famous for blueberry in this city.
I like this city.
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Kodaira city is in a suburb of Tokyo.
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The mayor is Masanori Kobayashi.
There are eleven junior high schools in this city.
It is famous for blueberry i this city.
This city is loved by a lot of citizen.
Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo.
返信削除It’s a residential town with a population of approximately 180,000.
The weather is mild with high temperatures around 30 degrees Celsius in summer.
There are good schools, parks and GHIBULI Museum in the city.
It’s famous for its convenience because Mitaka station has many lines.
It’s convenient and surrounded by nature, so it’s a nice place to live in.
Very well organized and written.
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It’s famous for its convenience because Mitaka station is a major terminal station.
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It has two hundred thousand people.
The weather is calm with middle temperatures.
It has jiburi museum, It is good place to go with friends.
I like my town, because it make me happy.
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Mitaka city is in a suburb of Tokyo prefecture.
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The population is two hundred thousand people.
The wether is clam with mild temperatures.
It has jiburi museum, it is good place to go with friends.
Tokyo is the capital in Japan.
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Tokyo has a population of about 9 million.
In summer, Tokyo is about 30 degrees.
It has Tokyotower, In summer, from the top you can see a superb view.
I like it because it has to make happy.
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Tokyo is the capital of Japan.
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Tokyo has a population of about 9 million.
It has Tokyotower it is great tower.
I like it because it has to make happy.
Chofu city in in suburb in Tokyo.
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Chofu is famous for Jindaiji-temple.
Many people visit there on new years day.
The temperature is high in summer.
In winter, Chofu is very cold.
Chofu has many nature.
Musashino city is in suburb in Tokyo.
返信削除The population is about 148,000.
In summer, it is about 30degrees
Musashino is famous for Kichijoji and there many shops.
It is very good and comfortable to live in.