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I think the job needs to be
interesting to me.
1. I’ll be working for many years.
If the job isn’t
interesting, I’ll be bored.
2. Also, if the job interests me, I’ll be
motivated/encouraged to work harder.
Then, the job may become more interesting.
I think the job needs to be like my hobby.
返信削除If my job is like my hobby, I will be excited to go for the job.
The job needs to be one of the reasons for alive because we have to work every day almost for the rest of my life.
If the job is not fun, I will quit my job and it means I can't gain money.
So, a job like my hobby is needed.
#2 excited=>
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#3 Also, ... important part of my life because I'll ...
#4 ... I may quit it and won't earn any money.
#5 I'll ...
I think the job needs to be like my hobby.
削除If ,y job is like my hobby, I will be excited to go to work.
Also, the job needs to be one of the important part of my life because I'll have to work every day almost for the rest of my life.
If the job is not fun, I may quit and won't earn any money.
So, I will needed a job like my hobby.
First, what job needs is tobe able to develop our personalities. I enjoy the work if you can express personality. Also, you may feel I'm a necessary person in the community.
返信削除Second, not too busy. Time for communication with your family or relaxing at home is more important to stay healthy both mentally and physically. Also, if there is a rest, we can feel we'll work hard tomorrow.
#1 the job suits my personality.
削除#4 The job shouldn't/mustn't be ...
#6 the next day
First, the job suits my personality. If you can express personality, you enjoy the work. Also, you may feel that you're a necessary person in the community
削除Second, job mustn't be too busy. Time for relaxing is more important to stay healthy both physically and mentally. Also, if there is a rest, you may think that you'll work harder the next day.
I think the job needs to be interesting to me.
返信削除If the job isn’t interest to me, I would not think try harder.
Also, I am sure that interesting job makes me fun.
That’s why, I think interesting is necessary for job.
#2 ... not try to work harder.
削除#3 ... me feel pleasant.
#4 Explain more. No need for a concluding sentence.
I think the job requires thinking what I want to do.
返信削除It is neccesary to feel a sence of achievement for the work because I will work with it for many years.
In my own case, I love seeing people's smile, so I want to help people in need.
Also, doing what I want to do naturally link with something I am interested in.
It is good to keep doing what's interesting.
#1 Not sure what you want to say. Write simply.
削除#2 because I'll be working for ...
#3 For me, ...
#4 => If I do what I'm interested in, ...
I think I needs to think what I want to do when I work.
削除It is neccesary to feel a sence of achievement for the work because I will be working for many years.
For me, I love seeing people's smile, so I want to help people in need.
Also if I do what I'm interested in, it will naturally link with what I want to do.
It is good to keep doing what's interesting.
I think the job needs to be exciting and irregular to me.
返信削除I can’t continue working if the job wasn’t exciting, and I want to discover many things throughout my job.
Also, if the job was irregular, it makes me feel more enjoyable because I like thinking of the day’s plan such as what time should I get up, what to do, and where to go to make my day valuable.
#1 ... and dynamic to me.
削除#2 ... exciting.
I want to enjoy finding/experiencing -ing ...
#3 Also, I want a job that requires different tasks and new challenges.
#4 I'll
I think the job needs to be exciting and dynamic to me.
削除I can’t continue working if the job wasn’t exciting, and I want to enjoy experiencing new things.
Also, I want a job that requires different tasks and new challenges.
I’ll enjoy making my daily plans to make my days valuable and enjoyable.
I think the needs to be exciting and money to me.
返信削除I’ ll work for many years.
If the job isn’t exciting I would not excited of my life.
Money is important for me because if I were haven’t money I can’t do what I want to.
So I think needs to be exciting and money.
#1 ... exciting.
削除#2 unnecessary.
#3 ... I will be bored.
#4 Also, the job pays me well.
If I don't earn money well, I ...
I think the needs to be exciting.
削除If the job isn’t exciting I will be bored.
Also, the job pays me well.
If I don’t earn money well,I can’t buy that I want to.
I think the job needs to be interesting with some responsibilities.
返信削除I’ll work with communication with customers.
If I work with moderate pressure, I can work hard for the purpose quickly.
Also, if the job interest me, the job would save me from stress.
I can enjoy my daily life too.
#2 what does this explain or support?
削除#3 "pressure" explains or supports what?
#4 If the job is interesting, I won't feel stressed so much.
I think the job needs to be interesting with some responsibilities.
削除Communicate with customer is very important if I work.
If iI work with moderate responsibility, I can work hard for the purpose quickly.
Also, if the job is interesting, I won’t feel stressed so much.
I can also enjoy my daily life too.
I think the job needs to be interesting to me.
返信削除I'm able to work for a long time without getting tired that the job is interested for me.
Also, it could be make more money.
It is necessary to live on and enjoy my life.
#2 If the job ..., I'll be ...
削除#3 Also, he job pays me well.
I think the job needs to be interesting to me.
削除If the job is interested for me, I'll be work for a long time without getting tired.
Also, he job pays me well.
It is necessary to live on and enjoy my life.
I think the job needs to be challenging.
返信削除If I do the same thing every day, I will be bored.
In that case, I don't want to work and I can't get any money.
Also, I will not be able to learn anything in the same work.
It is necessary for people to challenge and learn new things all of the time.
People pays their timw to working, so the job needs to have a lot of lernings.
#2 ... thing that I can do easily, ...
削除#3 And if I'm bored, I won't keep working for a job ...
#4 ... from the ...
#5 ... keep learning new things.
#6 If I learn more, I'll be mire ...
If I do the thing same thing that I can do easily, I will be bored.
削除And if I'm bored, I won't keep working for a job and I can't get any money.
Also, I will not be able to learn anything from the same work.
It is necessay for people to challenge and keep learning new things all of the time.
If I learn more, I'll be mire, but it is good for me.
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返信削除I think the job needs to be feel to be someone’s help.
I think so because customer’s good voices and thanks will become my energy to work.
I also think the job needs to be interesting to me.
I can learn positivity if I am interested about that.