Read and divide the article into four sections by
the event and the time.
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Write a
summary of the article in four sentences.
Intro, A New Kind of Restaurant:
McDonald brothers innovated the
operation of a hamburger restaurant into a fast food business in
California in 1948.
Another Fast-food Restaurant is Born:
The fast-food business was copied and grew rapidly at a time when the economy was growing, and automobiles became popular among families.
The fast-food business was copied and grew rapidly at a time when the economy was growing, and automobiles became popular among families.
The Growth of a New Industry, The Model Spreads:
This business model was so efficient that other new restaurants chains emerged and expanded nationwide, such as Burger King and Kentucky Fried Chicken.
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The chain store business model was soon adopted by other retail businesses like clothing stores and hotels and became international phenomena.
Brothers started a new restaurant called McDonald's with a new system which was more efficient and get rich quickly.
返信削除The way of McDonald's spread quickly and the fast-food business was born.
The fast food industry spread throughout the county because it was born at the right time and new technology had made automobiles dependable, affordable and easy to drive.
The business model led the spread of the chain store business model overseas to other countries and it became more international.
Very well organized and written!
削除Maurice and Richard McDonald try a new system of preparing and serving food which serve any food that required a knife, fork, or spoon to eat.
返信削除Carl’s Jr. and other fast food restaurant were made after being impressed by new restaurant system of McDonald’s.
Long distance travel with using a car and expansion of the U.S economy made new industry.
Various store and services copied the McDonald’s system and become international chains.
#3 Specify what industry/business
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The McDonald brothers wanted to do the restaurant without stresses of ownership so they made the system called fast-food restaurant which don't need Silverware and glassware and fast prepare for their new restaurant. Fast-food restaurant became very popular and owners from another restaurant think that system is a good business model so they opened their own fast-food restaurant.
返信削除The people at that time needed the restaurant which can serve fast so that kind of restaurant expanded everywhere in the US.
After the new industry growth, the fast-food restaurant expanded into worldwide.
#4 not only fast food but also other chain store businesses
削除Maurice and Richard started a new restaurant it is contrasted with the original.
返信削除The fast food restaurant cheaper than other restaurants.
This business model had used at the gasoline station
The chain store business model spread in the world.
#1 ... that was ...
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#3 ... expanded
McDonald’s system that didn’t need special workers, severs and a long time was new and it created the new business called fast food.
返信削除The fast-food business was thought as a good system, so it became famous and popular very quickly.
Many different fast-food stores were born because the business model was fit to the generation that many people went to a travel by their car.
The successful stores expanded to foreign countries and became international chains.
Very well written!
削除Maurice and Richard McDonald tried a new system of preparing food that called fast food.
返信削除The fast-food restaurant spread across the United States.
This business model copied and expanded into nationwide chains.
The chain store business model was spreading to other countries and it had become common in many countries.
#1 ... which was called ...
削除#3 ... was copied and then ...
MacDonal’s try to cook and waitress quick and it made a lot of money.
返信削除The fast food business was try to sell more cheaper.
The business model used to in a gasoline station in order to eat in the vehicle.
Many restaurants opt this system and it spread all over the world.
#1 ? Rewrite
削除#2 Correct the grammar errors!!!